Pipo the Clown
Put on your happy face17 total reviews
Comment from ZeBestBlonde1
fionageorge,
Hello to you. Ha! Another cute title-love that name, Pipo-very well chosen.
Cute poem as well-happy, uplifting, kinda gives a little advice to smile and be happy and to let go of those frowns-a good message to all, but well said to little ones as well-very kid friendly.
Great new poem!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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fionageorge,
Hello to you. Ha! Another cute title-love that name, Pipo-very well chosen.
Cute poem as well-happy, uplifting, kinda gives a little advice to smile and be happy and to let go of those frowns-a good message to all, but well said to little ones as well-very kid friendly.
Great new poem!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you Karlene, I appreciate your kind comments and review. Also those lovely stars, of course. I enjoyed writing this, and it was given the sign of approval by two of my grand-children before I posted. They picked the colour scheme.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from misscookie
I like the picture of the clown it's as bright as your poem
it made me smile and the words are filled with a postive mode. your telling th readers no matter what keep smiling things will get better. this is a good write.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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I like the picture of the clown it's as bright as your poem
it made me smile and the words are filled with a postive mode. your telling th readers no matter what keep smiling things will get better. this is a good write.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you, I appreciate your kind comments and review. Also those lovely stars, of course. I enjoyed writing this, and it was given the sign of approval by two of my grand-children before I posted. They picked the colour scheme.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from missy98writer
marijke,
You've written another wonderful poem. "Pipo the Clown" for the writing prompt to write a poem about a clown is well written. The art work is cute. Your rhyme, meter and descriptive scheme are well executed. I love the lines:
'Life is too short, to feel angry or sad.
So put on a smile, things won?t seem as bad.
Well, what's that I see - a fair dinkum grin'
Isn't that better? Now, let this show begin'
Your clown poem is a marvelous entry in the writing prompt. There was a clown I watched as a kid named Bozo the Clown. A TV station in Chicago, Illinois here in the states showed the TV show. Your poem brought back memories of clowns. My favorite song is "Don't Cry Out Loud." The song reminds me of clowns.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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marijke,
You've written another wonderful poem. "Pipo the Clown" for the writing prompt to write a poem about a clown is well written. The art work is cute. Your rhyme, meter and descriptive scheme are well executed. I love the lines:
'Life is too short, to feel angry or sad.
So put on a smile, things won?t seem as bad.
Well, what's that I see - a fair dinkum grin'
Isn't that better? Now, let this show begin'
Your clown poem is a marvelous entry in the writing prompt. There was a clown I watched as a kid named Bozo the Clown. A TV station in Chicago, Illinois here in the states showed the TV show. Your poem brought back memories of clowns. My favorite song is "Don't Cry Out Loud." The song reminds me of clowns.
Melissa.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you Melissa, I appreciate your kind comments and review. Also those lovely stars, of course. I enjoyed writing this, and it was given the sign of approval by two of my grand-children before I posted. They picked the colour scheme.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from Begin Again
Marijke
What an adorable poem...the clown making the sad little boy happy again...Clowns are such a happy place to be...Your author notes were superb as well.
Carol
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Marijke
What an adorable poem...the clown making the sad little boy happy again...Clowns are such a happy place to be...Your author notes were superb as well.
Carol
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you Carol, I appreciate your kind comments and review. Also those lovely stars, of course. I enjoyed writing this, and it was given the sign of approval by two of my grand-children before I posted. They picked the colour scheme.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from jlivory
fionageorge,
Very well done! I love this! Your rhythm and rhymes are excellent. Children will love this and I felt like a big kid when I was reading it. The tone of it set a really nice flow. I could read it smoothly or with excitement and still be throughly satisfied. The artwork is excellent and compliments your work.
Excellent work Poet!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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fionageorge,
Very well done! I love this! Your rhythm and rhymes are excellent. Children will love this and I felt like a big kid when I was reading it. The tone of it set a really nice flow. I could read it smoothly or with excitement and still be throughly satisfied. The artwork is excellent and compliments your work.
Excellent work Poet!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thank you, I appreciate your kind comments and review. Also those lovely stars, of course. I enjoyed writing this, and it was given the sign of approval by two of my grand-children before I posted. They picked the colour scheme.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from joemass
G'day from Canberra fionageorge
Neat, easy piece that captures the essence of a clown's life and purpose.
for some reason I can't explain the oem seemed to me to have too many 'little's in it when I first read it, though it isn't used all that much.
Good luck!
Joe
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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G'day from Canberra fionageorge
Neat, easy piece that captures the essence of a clown's life and purpose.
for some reason I can't explain the oem seemed to me to have too many 'little's in it when I first read it, though it isn't used all that much.
Good luck!
Joe
Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thanks Joe, from Canberra, I will revisit this again, see about the 'little's'. Appreciate your kind review and ratings.
Warmest regards
Marijke
Comment from nora arjuna
hi marijke, now you're making me smile with this delightful morning read. i enjoyed the excellent rhyme and nice word choice. i found no nits. :)
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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hi marijke, now you're making me smile with this delightful morning read. i enjoyed the excellent rhyme and nice word choice. i found no nits. :)
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2010
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2010
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Thanks Nora, I have Jardene and Brendan (grandchildren) here at the moment. I had to change a few times until it met with their approval! They also approved my picture and colour scheme.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Warmest regards
Marijke