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The Writer's Path

Once upon a time I decided to write......

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Comment from BJean
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Hi Carol this is a very whimsical entry to your once upon a time contest entry. I enjoyed the twists that incorporated so many talented posts with your humor. Very well written that kept the smiles coming. Love, Jean

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Jean

    Thank you so much for your kind review. Those new muses have me twisting in every direction. Appreciate the kind thoughts. Carol
Comment from anabelle
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Good posting. Personally, I really liked the ranting. You obviously have talent you haven't tapped into yet. Must be the muse.....

Congratulations on finishing first!

Regards, anabelle

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Anabelle

    Those knew muses have me running in every direction. I hope this feeble old mind can keep up with their whimsical ways. Thanks for the wonderful review. SEnding smiles to you, Carol
Comment from kingskid
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I am smiling at your little bit of silliness which is in fact very clever.
Love the way you tackled the writers you know so well and in such an amusing way.
We all need a light read like this to keep us smiling.
Really found it funny, not too sure about the writers you mentioned what they would have thought:)
keep it coming.
love
kingskid

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    kingskid

    They all have excellent sense of humors so I think it's okay. Glad it made you smile...Sending you some more, Carol :)

reply by kingskid on 03-Jan-2010
    I thought that was the case. The people on fs are all lovely and full of fun, well mostly:) Norms
Comment from patmedium
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Five stars, Carol, for your WONDERFUL piece of fun!
I've been here four weeks now, and I actually understood most of your references! How up-to-date is that?
Wonderful read... many, MANY chuckles! MUCH thanks! You surely donn't expect me to review it as well, do you? I think Puff the magic dragon made me curl up!
No review for you, dear...
I'm laughing too much!
Pat.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Pat

    I did my duty and you did your in return...I have a smile from ear to ear...I didn't realize you'd only been here for a few weeks. WE will have to become buddies....I always enjoy hearing from you...Thanks for lifting my spirits this morning...Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from rama devi
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This is hilarious and highly entertaining. I enjoyed all the fun references and am glad I review a lot so I knew almost every one of them intimately. I imagine newbies who read this might feel a bit lost, but anyone who knows all the characters will find it incredibly amusing.

And wittily written with consistent comic tone and excellent satirical overtones.

This made me LOL-

Besides, my last effort with dragons conjured up an elderly green caterpillar who believed he was Puff the Magic Dragon. Imagination at its best. Who do I think I'm fooling?

And the reference to Indy' Paddy-Padriac and moose-muse.

And blood tainting Brooke's and Margaret's peaceful nature scenes. HA HA HA!~


Lots of fun bits to note.

One tiny spag-
However, you do know that poor Jake, who you willing(did you mean: 'Willingly") left standing in the wings, probably could help you with your predicament.

Much enjoyed.
Laughter is good medicine.

Warmly,
rd

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Rama devi

    I am thrilled that you enjoyed this one. Yes, laughter is the best medicine. After writing the poem "Why?" , my mind traveled a sad route , I needed something to turn it around. Thank you very much. Smiles to you...Carol
Comment from melyuki
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And let the madness continue. My goodness big sis, you are definitely heading somewhere. No < I didn't say the nuthouse, not yet, but soon. You make me laugh with your crazy humourous storylines woman. I think you are going crazy and I luv it. The crazier the better, bring it on Sis. I reckon you will have touched base with half the folk here on Fanstory, and for those you didn't mention, they will be waiting anxiously for a sequel at some time. Well written manic madness / now which mimicing muse messed with your mind this time. huh, luv and hugs sis, great work smiling at you and with you, always from little sis. xxxxxx

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Sis

    Yeah...this one was fun...don't know where the craziness came from but it most definitely isn't a tear jerker...Glad you liked it...Carol
Comment from IndianaIrish
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What fun this is, Carol! You know, wee Paddy has been MIA since New Year's Eve ... look around your desk for him will ya? His last words to me was "I'll be off lookin' for a real writer, Missy Smarty Pants Indy." He may have found one in you. If you see a funny looking red-haired little dude in a green suit and pointed shoes, let me know and I'll send a postage-paid envelope for you to send him back to Indiana. I think I need the lil blighter.

Very fun read, Carol, and thanks for mentioning me and Paddy.

Smiles,
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Karyn

    I couldn't leave you and Paddy out of the story...That was such a darn cute one yu wrote and You're my friend...Glad you enjoyed it. If he's stuck in a snow bank out here, I'll send the dogs out looking for him and get him back to you. I'm waiting to see what magic you two are going to produce. Smiles, Carol
Comment from c_lucas
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This is a very humorous post. Thank you for the compliment. I enjoyed putting the writers with the plot. If you are into horror and murder mysteries, I have a plot I will never use. Great job.

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Charlie

    Glad you enjoyed your role in my story. Didn't you know that every one of my stories is a horror or mystery. I am frightened out of my skin that I can't write it and it's a mystery as to where I will end up each time.. LOL Smiles to you, CArol
Comment from Mrs Jones
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I loved your silliness. Even if you did start your story with "Once upon a time" we would all read it anyhow. Happy writing in 2010 Carol.
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 03-Jan-2010
    Rose

    I am so pleased with your kind remarks. Thanks for the smile this early morning. Hugs, Carol
Comment from Belinda
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Hey... I like your 'insanity'. I even chuckle several times at the mention of some of our FS writers. This is hilarious, based on a creative idea I would not think of in a hundred times. Thanks to your newfound muses?

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2010


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2010
    Belinda

    Aren't they wild? I don't know where the idea came from but it just popped into my head this morning and there it was...Crazy..should be an interesting 2010. Smiles, Carol