Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Just Like a Melody in a Song"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
24 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was gorgeous. I love the analogy of His words to a melody in a song.
Great imagery and visuals, delightful rhyming and I love your artwork.
Very much enjoyed, thank you.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Oh, this was gorgeous. I love the analogy of His words to a melody in a song.
Great imagery and visuals, delightful rhyming and I love your artwork.
Very much enjoyed, thank you.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2023
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Oh, thank you! That you felt it worthy of 6 stars was such an encouragement to me and your review only inspired me more.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Every one of your poems is a portrait of your inner world where God is ever-present. The title of your book is perfect for this wonderful collection of poetry.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Every one of your poems is a portrait of your inner world where God is ever-present. The title of your book is perfect for this wonderful collection of poetry.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Ginda, Thank you again, for your inspiring review. I find your comments so encouraging! God bless you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Who are we listening to in this little poem? A bird? A favourite singer? It would be good to know, or was it just the wind singing? Love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Who are we listening to in this little poem? A bird? A favourite singer? It would be good to know, or was it just the wind singing? Love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Dolly, Thanks for pointing this out. I added a little note in the Author's notes to clarify. Thanks again for reviewing and giving it a good rating, nonetheless.
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Great!
Comment from Heather Knight
This is lovely. Despite being a short poem, the cute rhymes make it quite lively and attractive.
It's something I could read again and again, which I don't often do.
Very much enjoyed. Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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This is lovely. Despite being a short poem, the cute rhymes make it quite lively and attractive.
It's something I could read again and again, which I don't often do.
Very much enjoyed. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2023
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Dear Heather, Thank you so much for writing such an inspiring and encouraging review and, even though it's short, giving it a good rating. I appreciate it and hope you have a lovely weekend. Guðbjörg
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Cute little poem. Maybe you would like to go back and upload the picture so we can enjoyed too:) I resonate with this part :"During the day, and in the night,
He's always there by your side." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Cute little poem. Maybe you would like to go back and upload the picture so we can enjoyed too:) I resonate with this part :"During the day, and in the night,
He's always there by your side." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review on my little poem and I really appreciate your comment on the missing picture. Looking for one ot put there.
Gb
Comment from Nowhereman1
Very well written poem. Short sweet and easy to read. You get your story across without needing to much words. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Very well written poem. Short sweet and easy to read. You get your story across without needing to much words. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and your input. I really appreciate it.
Gb
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gudbjorg.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A good poem with and
good topic and theme of
melody in a song.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-He is always there.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Gudbjorg.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-A good poem with and
good topic and theme of
melody in a song.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-He is always there.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your review and input on my poem, I really appreciate it and will see if I can find some artwork that matches with the poem.
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You are welcome. You don't have to have artwork, but you mentioned MoonWillow in your notes. That is why I mentioned it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Just Like a Melody in a Song, seems to speak to the words of God that linger on the min d and coloer each new item with a shade of hope.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This poem, Just Like a Melody in a Song, seems to speak to the words of God that linger on the min d and coloer each new item with a shade of hope.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your fine review and input. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Wonderful! What a faith in God! You feel He is always there by your side, and like a melody in a song, you listen to Him all day long; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Wonderful! What a faith in God! You feel He is always there by your side, and like a melody in a song, you listen to Him all day long; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Keep Writing, Inspiring, Changing
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your wonderful review. Knowing that He's with us all the time comes from believing in His Word and not relying on our feelings for they're fickle and ever-changing but Gods Word stands forever.
Comment from JLR
I must say that I found it rare to have the pleasure of reading two poems from the same poet back to back. Quite frankly, this was special because it created the depth of your Spirituality from poem to poem. Thank you for these gifts of pleasure.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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I must say that I found it rare to have the pleasure of reading two poems from the same poet back to back. Quite frankly, this was special because it created the depth of your Spirituality from poem to poem. Thank you for these gifts of pleasure.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and reaction. It was a pleasure to know that you really enjoyed my writing.
