Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Up in the Mountains"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
29 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is a wonderful spiritual poem full of hope and light. It lifts the spirits and is soothing and warm.
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Much enjoyed, thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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That is a wonderful spiritual poem full of hope and light. It lifts the spirits and is soothing and warm.
Excellent imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.
Much enjoyed, thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Th thank you so much for your wonderful review. I really appreciate your company, it was very helpful.
Comment from Ben Colder
I watched documentation on Iceland and never knew it was beautiful in certain places. Your poem is right on with God's beauty. Not sure about the volcano0s
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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I watched documentation on Iceland and never knew it was beautiful in certain places. Your poem is right on with God's beauty. Not sure about the volcano0s
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your review and comments, always nice to hear from people who like talk about my country. It has it's Beaty and can be breath taking like the Northern Lights and much more.
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, this is a beautifully written poem and I enjoyed to read it very much. I can understand how you got the inspiration. I live in the mountains, in Spain, and they often inspire me. I'm a prose writer, but I do enjoy reading poetry.
May I be so free to ask whether you're from Iceland? I'm Danish so your writing name stood out. All best. Ulla :)))
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hi there, this is a beautifully written poem and I enjoyed to read it very much. I can understand how you got the inspiration. I live in the mountains, in Spain, and they often inspire me. I'm a prose writer, but I do enjoy reading poetry.
May I be so free to ask whether you're from Iceland? I'm Danish so your writing name stood out. All best. Ulla :)))
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Hi Ulla,
Thank you so much for your wonderful review as well as your words about my poem. It was a real joy to my heart and a refreshment to my soul.
Yes, I?m from Iceland but now living in Central Portugal--not so far away from you, I think.
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I'm twenty km inland from the coast of Costa Blanca, halfway between, Alicante and Valencia in a beautiful valley called Vall de Laguar. Can I ask the area of Portugal you live in? Ulla
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I really enjoyed how you expressed the heavenly feel of living in the mountains and of nature's beauty, angels, warriors and our awesome Creator. Great rhyme.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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I really enjoyed how you expressed the heavenly feel of living in the mountains and of nature's beauty, angels, warriors and our awesome Creator. Great rhyme.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your marvellous review, it was really expressed beautifully.
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You are so welcome :)
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows us the divine nature of nature. You do feel awe and closeness to God when up on mountains. It seems that you move from nature to the traveling apostles which were the first givers of light.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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This shows us the divine nature of nature. You do feel awe and closeness to God when up on mountains. It seems that you move from nature to the traveling apostles which were the first givers of light.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your review and comments about Iceland. For more information: icelandictimes.com and visiticeland.com
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from oliver818
This is a beautiful little poem, I enjoyed reading it. I especially like the imagery you used. Switzerland is stunning and you captured that well here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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This is a beautiful little poem, I enjoyed reading it. I especially like the imagery you used. Switzerland is stunning and you captured that well here. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 30-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your comments and review. I come from a land of mountains and I love to experience them. I hope the poem encourages you through your day.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A nature write filled with hope and faith and the natural beauty of mountains and the surrounding flowers that bring joy to our earth, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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A nature write filled with hope and faith and the natural beauty of mountains and the surrounding flowers that bring joy to our earth, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your great review- it was a joy to read.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful
Photo choice to compliment your words as well.looks so peaceful. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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This is a nicely written poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Beautiful
Photo choice to compliment your words as well.looks so peaceful. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much! The mountain in the photo is on the Snæfellsnes peninsula in West Iceland - a very beautiful area.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Not too bad. A little rough in places, but a good topic. What do you think about changing the fifth line to "Unearthly voices speak to me there."? You are up in the mountains, and this takes care of the near rhyme.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Not too bad. A little rough in places, but a good topic. What do you think about changing the fifth line to "Unearthly voices speak to me there."? You are up in the mountains, and this takes care of the near rhyme.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thank you for pointing out this weakness in the rhyme. Your suggestion makes it much better and I have made that change.
Comment from Dr. Nad
You have artfully taken the gifts God has given to the human race and reminded us of where they came from. You have used the metaphor of Gods creation, the beauty of nature, to help propel us to our purpose in life: "Full surrender of our lives to the Creator of all life." Thanks ð??? for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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You have artfully taken the gifts God has given to the human race and reminded us of where they came from. You have used the metaphor of Gods creation, the beauty of nature, to help propel us to our purpose in life: "Full surrender of our lives to the Creator of all life." Thanks ð??? for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021
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Thanks so much for your inspiring review and your insight into the world of God's Spirit. We live in uncharted, but exciting, times!
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You are most welcome! #EmbraceTheLoveFromAbove