Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The White Fairy"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
27 total reviews
Comment from Benny Beeharry
I think this poem has done its job, providing all the encouragement you intended to give.
Well done. Beautifully written ,simple language ,effortlessly drifting to the end. The angel sounds so true to life.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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I think this poem has done its job, providing all the encouragement you intended to give.
Well done. Beautifully written ,simple language ,effortlessly drifting to the end. The angel sounds so true to life.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 02-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for a great review, so wonderful to read it.Very helpful. Gudbjorg
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Fearless living, a righteous living is feasible, God's glory words from white fairy to ears, what else to fear, living to get a road to Heaven, now true living in humanity is the endowment, nice, I liked & enjoyed. 01/102
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Fearless living, a righteous living is feasible, God's glory words from white fairy to ears, what else to fear, living to get a road to Heaven, now true living in humanity is the endowment, nice, I liked & enjoyed. 01/102
Comment Written 02-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your great review, really liked it. Glad you liked my fairy poem.
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A great recognition
Thank you for a wise decision and reposing confidence upon my reviewing.
Comment from Starlit Ink
Your poem has a soft, dreamy and feminine appeal. We are all bathed in light, whether from angels or those special family members. This poem is a touching reminder that we are surrounded with love if we only open our eyes.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Your poem has a soft, dreamy and feminine appeal. We are all bathed in light, whether from angels or those special family members. This poem is a touching reminder that we are surrounded with love if we only open our eyes.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much for your beautiful words about my poem an excellent review. I like where you say its soft and feminine that reprecents love and beauty.
Comment from AnnaLinda
sarahice,
I really enjoyed reading your poem, "The White Fairy" It has such pleasant and heavenly thoughts within it. It is both uplifting and inspiring.
Here is one of my favorite parts of it:
"A love fairy in all it's splendour
giving her all in full surrender."
You did a great job on this poem.
SweetLinda
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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sarahice,
I really enjoyed reading your poem, "The White Fairy" It has such pleasant and heavenly thoughts within it. It is both uplifting and inspiring.
Here is one of my favorite parts of it:
"A love fairy in all it's splendour
giving her all in full surrender."
You did a great job on this poem.
SweetLinda
Comment Written 30-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it and also telling me your favourite parts of it. Sarah
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You are welcome. It was my pleasure!
Comment from Abba Lin
Hi sarahice... I enjoyed reading your poem.. I understand your message. Your rhyme and flow were great...Your ending was awesome... I not sure about the fairy thing though..But your poem was good... Love Lin
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Hi sarahice... I enjoyed reading your poem.. I understand your message. Your rhyme and flow were great...Your ending was awesome... I not sure about the fairy thing though..But your poem was good... Love Lin
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you for your wonderful reply and review, it was really helpful to me and I'm glad you said it was awesome.
Comment from fictionwriter
What a wonderful thing to imagine around you at all times. I would love to see and feel those fairies and their love. Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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What a wonderful thing to imagine around you at all times. I would love to see and feel those fairies and their love. Great job.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you for your wonderful reaction to my poem and review. Well, my friend, all things are possible really in the spiritual realm.
Comment from HalfHoff
Oh WOW! Could you please give her directions to MY house? ha?! This is excellent -- filled with vivid images and, well, perfect. Thank you! Lea Ann
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Oh WOW! Could you please give her directions to MY house? ha?! This is excellent -- filled with vivid images and, well, perfect. Thank you! Lea Ann
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2009
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Already done, do you feel her in the wind, and hear her whisper in your ear? Thank's for your great review that thrilled my heart.
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is a lovely piece of
verse - has a smooth flow
to the words and rhyme
throughtout -
A love fairy in all it's splendour - (it's - it is)
.....................its splendour
Well penned, Sara.
Margaret.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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This is a lovely piece of
verse - has a smooth flow
to the words and rhyme
throughtout -
A love fairy in all it's splendour - (it's - it is)
.....................its splendour
Well penned, Sara.
Margaret.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you so much for your detailed review with little corrections. It was great.
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Thank you so much for your detailed review with little corrections. It was great.
Comment from pugdogy
good job!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece of work. I enjoyed the author notes also, what a beautiful gift this was for your friend. keep up the great work!!!
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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good job!!! I really enjoyed reading this piece of work. I enjoyed the author notes also, what a beautiful gift this was for your friend. keep up the great work!!!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you for your encouraging review that really touched my heart.
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Thank you for your encouraging review that really touched my heart.
Comment from Lynn D.
I really like this poem, the rhythm is good, and I enjoyed the image it created. I love the image of an uplifting, encouraging "fairy", someone who loves you when you are at your lowest and pulls you up, giving you a hand and helping you through it. For me the last stanza was a bit confusing the first time I read it. After reading it again the meaning became clear, and I really like it. It was just hard for me to catch after flowing through the first two stanzas.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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I really like this poem, the rhythm is good, and I enjoyed the image it created. I love the image of an uplifting, encouraging "fairy", someone who loves you when you are at your lowest and pulls you up, giving you a hand and helping you through it. For me the last stanza was a bit confusing the first time I read it. After reading it again the meaning became clear, and I really like it. It was just hard for me to catch after flowing through the first two stanzas.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2009
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Thank you for your honest review, ti was really helpful. With my best regards Sarah
