POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from L.lora
Another great poem Carol,
deep emtions expressed
with so few words. Yet,
your poem is delicate and
offers promised hoped to
all who dare to share
love. No nits.. :)Lora
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Another great poem Carol,
deep emtions expressed
with so few words. Yet,
your poem is delicate and
offers promised hoped to
all who dare to share
love. No nits.. :)Lora
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Lora
Thanks for the awesome comments, Appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from dlewis
Excellent and the perfect picture to back up what you say...and the Earth does rumble when when Two BECOME ONE...So does the BED... FANASTNIC...dlewis
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Excellent and the perfect picture to back up what you say...and the Earth does rumble when when Two BECOME ONE...So does the BED... FANASTNIC...dlewis
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
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dlewis
Good...then that wasn't my imagination. I thought I was getting too old. LOL Thanks for the review. CArol
Comment from misscookie
Your funny first you write about us mature people love situration change, next you write about the hat steamy young people whats going on with you. (smile )
I love the oem it was very hot.
Good write... oh yes I chanfe the chapters now If I could only get that thing about doing contest well it to shall come one day I just hope it comes before I miss another contest.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Your funny first you write about us mature people love situration change, next you write about the hat steamy young people whats going on with you. (smile )
I love the oem it was very hot.
Good write... oh yes I chanfe the chapters now If I could only get that thing about doing contest well it to shall come one day I just hope it comes before I miss another contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Cookie Thanks for the review. If you find a contest you want to enter and need help in knowing how just ask. I'll do my best! Carol
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you know I kinda got how to get the picture or paintinh its that cop then paste kinda gets me mixed up my daugther showed me friday I wrote it down with yous and other people telling mewhat to do Which I'm working on that Gods watching you was supose to be in contest but got on the other thing I didnt copy or paste i justwrote the poem in the wrire section then I rember I was to click something first in the contest page before I post but for the love of money i didn't see a box telling me to touch it is it thatbox withan x i think sayins sumit or enter you poem here if so I'm still stuck with that paste part.. Ill get it sooner or later.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Innocently sensual, very good. You, once again, described a feeling in only fifteen words. I admire the way you do it. I can't imagine pulling it off. Gread job.
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Innocently sensual, very good. You, once again, described a feeling in only fifteen words. I admire the way you do it. I can't imagine pulling it off. Gread job.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
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Barbara
I appreciate your praise very much. I know you could do it just as well if not better. Thanks again. Carol
Comment from RebelRose
Wow, you're really on a love kick today, huh? Well, love is one of the best inspirations for good poetry. Great job and a good read. The picture is nice, too.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Wow, you're really on a love kick today, huh? Well, love is one of the best inspirations for good poetry. Great job and a good read. The picture is nice, too.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
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RebelRose
Don't know what triggered it...maybe because after days and days of gray and rain..it is sunny and warm. Hurrah! Suppose to be like this for a few days. I'm lovin' it!
Carol
Comment from Just2Write
Nicely done. You have done much with just a few words. A bit of romantic poetry always makes the reader's heart grow lighter. The poem is well suited to the graphics you chose to compliment it. Just my eye perhaps, but I would centre the lines vs. left aligning. Rose
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Nicely done. You have done much with just a few words. A bit of romantic poetry always makes the reader's heart grow lighter. The poem is well suited to the graphics you chose to compliment it. Just my eye perhaps, but I would centre the lines vs. left aligning. Rose
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
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Rose
Thanks so much for the review. I entered a different one in the contest and then this one exploded in my mind. So I decided just to write it and post it. It was suppose to be centered so I am glad that you brought that to my attention. Thanks again...Carol
Comment from pilgrim_of_truth
I want what you have portrayed, it is excellent, yet again your work is inspiring and touching - well done you
I can't add any more
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I want what you have portrayed, it is excellent, yet again your work is inspiring and touching - well done you
I can't add any more
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
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Pilgrim
Thank you so much for the kind review. I think all of us are looking for that special moment....Appreciate the review. CArol
Comment from fjonvose
Simple and good use of rhyme. Good use of descriptive words to describe the moment. Good job making a short three verse poem give the reader a lot of imagery.
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Simple and good use of rhyme. Good use of descriptive words to describe the moment. Good job making a short three verse poem give the reader a lot of imagery.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
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fjonvose
Thank you for the review. Appreciate the thoughts. CArol
Comment from AnnaLinda
Begin Again!
Just marvelous! All your thoughts within this poem are wonderful! It's earth shaking: "The Earth rumbles, trumpets blare" wow! and..."finally there....Ecstasy for two"
This is a very grand poem!!
SweetLinda
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Begin Again!
Just marvelous! All your thoughts within this poem are wonderful! It's earth shaking: "The Earth rumbles, trumpets blare" wow! and..."finally there....Ecstasy for two"
This is a very grand poem!!
SweetLinda
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
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Linda
Yeah...wish I would have thought of it before I entered the other one. Oh well, life shall march on regardless. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from Phil Kitom
This is really erotic,sensual and
says so much about the act of love
and the picture adds tremendous
power to a wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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This is really erotic,sensual and
says so much about the act of love
and the picture adds tremendous
power to a wonderful poem.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2009
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Phil
I couldn't have said it better if I critiqued it myself. Thank you for your kind and most generous thoughts. Smiles and have a great day! Carol
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two hearts thinking alike