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Viewing comments for Chapter 59 "A Mother's Gift"
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Comment from Kingsland
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this poem read as a heart full of love for someone. I enjoyed reading and writing a review for this well written verse... John

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    John

    Thank you for the review. Appreciate the comments. Carol
Comment from WRITER1
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I am very sorry. It's hard to lose a child. It makes the memories all the more wonderful. This is a very nice tribute to Michael

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Writer

    Thank you for your kind words. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from Mrs Jones
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The words are beautiful and your story so sad it hurt my heart. I cannot imagine. A wonderful tribute to this lovely child. God bless you.
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Mrs. Jones

    Thank you for the kind review and the most gracious comments. Carol
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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There is nothing stronger than a mothers love a bond that is never broken your love you have expressed well a sad piece cherished memories well done regards Fuller

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Fuller

    Thank you for your kind comments and generous review. Carol
Comment from GentleWind
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Thank you for introducing me to your son, Michael. His smile lights up the page and my day. Your words are truly from a mothers heart and a gift of God. I enjoyed your piece and may God Bless you in your endeavors.

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    GentleWind

    You are most gracious in your words and thoughts. I am very appreciative of every word. Thank you so much. CArol
Comment from smileycloud
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hey
a beautiful poem of great depth and say a lifetime of blessings in such a few heartfelt words
as for your poem it is well written and the most realistic love certainly meets the prompt
as for the smiling eyes of your son, they are shining all over the world now, jumping off the page to meet us and to make our day better for it
your author notes tells me that your soul is very well connected to your boy and to Heaven
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    smileycloud

    Thank you for your most gracious comments. I am pleased that you recognized his glorious smile. It is that smile that helps me continue each day. Always, Carol
Comment from Hitcher
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A mothers love is endless and far reaching, it touches the heart and soul and is forever, great poem friend, loved it! All the best in the contest, this is a contender for sure!

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Hitcher

    Thank you for your very kind and warm comments. Smiles to you, Carol
Comment from tony bronk
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I'm sorry that your son is no longer with you any more. it must have hurt you terribly we he went away but, I'm happy that you keep such happy memories. Tony

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    Tony

    I am very fortunate that God saw fit to give me a life time of memories in a short period of time. Thank you for your kind words. Carol
Comment from giftid3
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Thanks for sharing such an emotive piece of art with the rest of us. There is so much love oozing through the lines that it cannot help but draw the reader in. Thank you for that. One thing I noticed after reading your poem, was that it also had this sadness to it, and then when I read your profile, it all made sense. This is well done and well expressed, and in just a few words you have shared the unconditional love of a mother and son, and the beauty received in reciprocation of that love. For one who has overcome many tragedies in life, I tip my hat to you, for your work personifies a deep strength and determination that surpasses all obstacles. Thank you for the experience. Many blessings to you. In God's love

 Comment Written 04-Nov-2009

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    goftod3

    Thank you very much for the comments and love that you so generously shared wtih me. I appreciate it very much, Carol
Comment from Amfunny
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Absolutely beautiful and I can tell it was written from the heart. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this and I thank you for sharing this. Great job.

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2009

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    Amfunny

    Thank you so much. His smile gives me strength to live each day. CArol