POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 53 "Goblins On Parade!"When I dabble at things.....
36 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Begin Again,
so good to see you posting such a happy sounding poem reminding us the fun day of Halloween for children which is just around the corner.
Great picture
Big smile
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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Hello Begin Again,
so good to see you posting such a happy sounding poem reminding us the fun day of Halloween for children which is just around the corner.
Great picture
Big smile
Gert
Comment Written 20-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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Gert
Happy was the name of the game with this one. Glad you enjoyed it. Smiles, Carol
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Smiles Carol
Gert
Comment from leesm
Halloween night, and children at the door- feigning fright. Lovely image in a well written septolet.
Nicely done, and good luck in the contest.
-Lee
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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Halloween night, and children at the door- feigning fright. Lovely image in a well written septolet.
Nicely done, and good luck in the contest.
-Lee
Comment Written 20-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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lee,
Glad you enjoyed it. I always love greeting the kids on Halloween. Smiles for everyone! Carol
Comment from melyuki
Oh! this is so cute. What a gorgeous picture this brings to mind. Hey, trickle treat to you Young Carol. Great little poem and now I know what a septolet is. (on first sight the word conjured up the thought of a septic toilet.)
So glad it wasn't. Did't feel like dealing in more poo.
Love the rhyme , great choice of words to paint this adorable image in my mind. I'll remember your words next time a little tot comes knocking at my door. In fact, last weekend a little knock on my door , came as a cute surprise. 3 little kids. a little boy about 5, standing there with a beaming smile, says" have a lovely day ". and from there we all had a funny conversation. the other 2 were identical twins about 10yrs. Wonders of kids.....
great job young Carol..... luv Mel
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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Oh! this is so cute. What a gorgeous picture this brings to mind. Hey, trickle treat to you Young Carol. Great little poem and now I know what a septolet is. (on first sight the word conjured up the thought of a septic toilet.)
So glad it wasn't. Did't feel like dealing in more poo.
Love the rhyme , great choice of words to paint this adorable image in my mind. I'll remember your words next time a little tot comes knocking at my door. In fact, last weekend a little knock on my door , came as a cute surprise. 3 little kids. a little boy about 5, standing there with a beaming smile, says" have a lovely day ". and from there we all had a funny conversation. the other 2 were identical twins about 10yrs. Wonders of kids.....
great job young Carol..... luv Mel
Comment Written 20-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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Mel
Now you are telling me my writing belongs in the septic tank...Thanks just what I wanted this morning! LOL
Glad you liked the little thing. It was fun to write! You should have joined the contest too.
Hugs, Carol
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awwww shucks big sis, I'll leave you to win this one. xx short flush from Mel
Comment from asma khan
Excellent art work which coordinated with the poem.
Words are good and the poem is with smooth flow.
A septolet poem with 14 words and seven lines, its not easy but you did the great job.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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Excellent art work which coordinated with the poem.
Words are good and the poem is with smooth flow.
A septolet poem with 14 words and seven lines, its not easy but you did the great job.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2009
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asma khan
Thanks for stopping by and for the kind remarks.
Smiles, Carol
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You are welcome.
Asma
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You are welcome.
Asma
Comment from Belinda
Still in the Halloween mood? Attractive poem in septolet form, Carol, with a matching picture, too. The second verse is so typicallyt children:
"Feigning fright,
children squealing
in delight."
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Still in the Halloween mood? Attractive poem in septolet form, Carol, with a matching picture, too. The second verse is so typicallyt children:
"Feigning fright,
children squealing
in delight."
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Belinda
Glad you liked this little ditty...I love watching the little children get so excited when they come trick or treating. Thanks for the kind review...Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Cute poem. I so love Halloween when the little ones come to my door. They are so cute and your poem reflected that feeling and the how adorable the little ones are. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Cute poem. I so love Halloween when the little ones come to my door. They are so cute and your poem reflected that feeling and the how adorable the little ones are. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Barbara
I love it too! My grandchildren love it when I act like they scared me. Their giggles are contagious. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from L.lora
Oh Carole (no I'm not
breaking into song) this
is so fun and uplifting.
Excellently written by your
accomplished pen, a delight
to read. no nits.. Lora
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Oh Carole (no I'm not
breaking into song) this
is so fun and uplifting.
Excellently written by your
accomplished pen, a delight
to read. no nits.. Lora
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Lora
Well, you might not be breaking into song, but I sure am with your wonderful uplifting review...good thing you can't hear me though...off key...the dogs are howling right now. LOL Thanks for the wonderful review. CArol
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello Poet and just wanted to return the review. What a lovely photo pic and the color scheme is great. I enjoyed your sweet Halloween poem. Good luck in the contest. LOyd
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Hello Poet and just wanted to return the review. What a lovely photo pic and the color scheme is great. I enjoyed your sweet Halloween poem. Good luck in the contest. LOyd
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Loyd
Sweet I know how to do...Not so much on the horror! Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it! CArol
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Good morning Carol and you are so very welcome. Loyd
Comment from c_lucas
In the fifties, we could trick or treat without much thought of danger. This is very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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In the fifties, we could trick or treat without much thought of danger. This is very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Charlie
Yeah...I remember, but those days are gone. Now they want you to take the candy to hospitals to be x-rayed and the churches all have "trunk and treats' because it's not safe on the streets. Really sad! Smiles, Carol
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Un fortunately. That's modern life. I heard in my mind that you were dressing up as Lady Godiva this Halloween. (LOL)
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Charlie
You missed it...I was Lady Godiva last year. I thinking maybe Marilyn....
Smiles to you..Carol
Comment from TheBritsWife
Hi Carol! This is a charming little Halloween frolic! It reminds me of the hordes of kids that will come knocking on my door soon. The little kids are so cute, but some of the teen-agers that come around are bigger than I am! I think you nailed the septolet form by depicting the holiday as eerie in the first part and delightful in the second. Two parts coming together to create a vivid picture. Good luck in the contest! - Karen ;-)
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Hi Carol! This is a charming little Halloween frolic! It reminds me of the hordes of kids that will come knocking on my door soon. The little kids are so cute, but some of the teen-agers that come around are bigger than I am! I think you nailed the septolet form by depicting the holiday as eerie in the first part and delightful in the second. Two parts coming together to create a vivid picture. Good luck in the contest! - Karen ;-)
Comment Written 19-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
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Karen
Thanks so much. I had know idea what this type of poem called for so I just wrote what I felt. Guess I did it right! Score 1 for me...Yeah! Thanks for the review. CArol