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Diaphanous Dustings

Snowflakes- Please read notes

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Comment from Oatmeal
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Helvi2,

This was a little hard to read because the letters were so small. Vivid impressions and rich narration, all lines formatted very well.

There were no errors to be found.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009

    Uh Oh !
    I hope you weren't reading the artwork poem,it was just meant to be a visual complement. It's not the poem for the prompt contest.The Septolet poem is written in blue beneath the artwork.

    Tom allowed me to add the Ballerina as art in my porfolio on Fan Art because it fits two catagories, poem and art.

    The Ballerina of Snow" was posted in readable font size on the date of January 29, 2008. I'm sorry if I led you to believe it was my current posted poem, though I did include the info in my author's notes

    Hope you read "Diaphanous Dustings"on its own. If not please come back and read it. I placed my new poem with the art because they complemented each other.

    Hope I didn't cause you too much confusion.

    Smiles and Hugs,
    Helvi :o)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Helvi2
I'm so glad you did re post your wonderful art work and NEW poem
what a prefect entry for this contest
I really wish you loads of luck
smiles
Gert

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
    Thank you Gert, Your kind words always mean a lot to me. When you say you enjoy what I did I always end up with a smile. Thank you so much for the review and wishes for the contest Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
Comment from Teri7
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This is very nice what you have posted for the contest. I love anything about snow and snow flakes. I love your wording. Great job my friend. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
    Hugs, Right back at you my friend! Thanks you for the wonderful review. Anytime I can make you smile is a wonderful day. More Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from adewpearl
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I like your use of alliteration and the lovely descriptive detail and personification of the snow flakes in this poem, Helvi. It is a fanciful and fun read :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

Comment from missy98writer
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You did a five star rating with this type of poetry. I've seen this type of poetry before and shadow poetry.com, but I've never tried it myself. I'm giving you five stars for an superb poem for the prompt: Septuplet Poem writing. I loved the art work you used with the falling letters.
Thanks for writing this type of poetry and doing a cool job. missy98writer.


 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

Comment from Judian James
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Yes!!! I loved it all. I never saw the first one because I was new to the site and hadn't found your work yet. This is so charming ... part A and B! I loved it Helvi!!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009
    Hi Jude,"THANKS!!!". a million yimes over! I have quite a few designer poems here. A butterfly,swan,snowman,snowflake, tulip, champagne glass and an Acrostic with two hearts. I might even have more. I guess its time I put them in a book so I know where they all are. I'm glad you like parts A and B of this poem. Getting a GREAT review from you always makes me smile. Thanks my friend for your kind words. If you would like to see previous ones I wrote I'd be happy to point you in the right direction. Hugs and Smiles, Helvi :o)
reply by Judian James on 19-Oct-2009
    I remember several of yours and after I tried one, I think I even dedicated it to you!!
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2009

    Now I really feel embarrassed!!! I don't remember your poem, but if I encouraged you to write one I am honored. There is nothing that makes one so humble as knowing someone else wants to try something you started.
    I know I'm not the creator of shape poems, but I'd like to think I added another level. and I'm sure you know working with EVIL EDDIE is not a easy task.
    One of these days I MIGHT try to do a Clive poem, but am not sure I can pull one off. You and Sally are masters of them.

    Many Hugs my friend,
    Helvi :o)
Comment from Patrick G Cox
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Very clever poem and a clever word picture to accompany it. It conveys very nicely the wonder of fresh snow and of the chll, though i is really the beauty of it all that comes through here. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

Comment from nancyjam
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This is a wonderful piece that paints
a beautiful picture in a few well chosen
words. Your artwork is a perfect partner
to your most creative poem. Love the
alliteration.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

Comment from MizKat
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Your poem was really neat. I've never heard of septolet poetry before. It is very well done and your artwork with it is wonderful.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009

Comment from Plotosaurus
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What a creative blending of poetic art and poetry. Your subject matter is very timely. This is a nice example of the septolet form and a strong contest entry. Best of luck with your writing and keep up the good work.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2009