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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "pure refreshment"keep your hope alive....
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Comment from findingmyroom
You render beautiful images here: moisture, grass, love, re-birth. It's almost as if you are an extension of the earth and the grass while lying in the rain.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2009
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You render beautiful images here: moisture, grass, love, re-birth. It's almost as if you are an extension of the earth and the grass while lying in the rain.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2009
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cool! thanx! :)
Comment from mmichelle97219
Its a good one, shelley, and as usual it has a beautiful metaphorical quality to it in its simple presentation the multiple layers just add to the gorgeousness. Nice one.
Michelle
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Its a good one, shelley, and as usual it has a beautiful metaphorical quality to it in its simple presentation the multiple layers just add to the gorgeousness. Nice one.
Michelle
Comment Written 12-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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thankyathankya :)
Comment from sgalletti
Lovely imagery described through your great selection of words in this short poem. I particularly liked 'on moist grass while rain pours'. Let's the reader ask just how much moisture one can endure...Sue
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Lovely imagery described through your great selection of words in this short poem. I particularly liked 'on moist grass while rain pours'. Let's the reader ask just how much moisture one can endure...Sue
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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hehe thanx! :)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi shelley,
What you need rain in California it's that dry
you have to lay upon the grass and wait?
A wonderful refreshing Naani poem for the contest.
Gert
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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Hi shelley,
What you need rain in California it's that dry
you have to lay upon the grass and wait?
A wonderful refreshing Naani poem for the contest.
Gert
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2009
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2009
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basically LOL! :)
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Smiles
see you later.
Gert
