POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Scrubbin' The Night Away"When I dabble at things.....
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Comment from Falafa
Very clever. I enjoyed reading this. And, yes, it put a smile on my face and a chuckle in my heart. Well done and thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Very clever. I enjoyed reading this. And, yes, it put a smile on my face and a chuckle in my heart. Well done and thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Falafa Thanks for enjoying the little silly song. I appreciate your comments. Carol
Comment from medicnate
Yup, very silly. You should have entered it into a song writing contest, it's very catchy. The poem has a nice pace to it and flows from line to line. Very nice work.
~medicnate~
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Yup, very silly. You should have entered it into a song writing contest, it's very catchy. The poem has a nice pace to it and flows from line to line. Very nice work.
~medicnate~
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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medicnate
Hope it made you smile...Thanks for the kind review. Carol
Comment from Kingsland
this started out as a rather weird song and ended up as a very good message song. I liked the cleverness written into this piece.It was my pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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this started out as a rather weird song and ended up as a very good message song. I liked the cleverness written into this piece.It was my pleasure to have read and written a review for... John
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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John
I must admit that I have felt the same "weird" feeling when reviewing some of your poems LOL Actually, only because you are so much more loftier than I. I was challenged to write something silly and I think you will agree I accomplished that and even managed a good message. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Carol
Comment from Jersey Dreamer
Hello Begin again,
Gosh I never knew there was so many scrubbers around, ha ha,
I was quietly smiling while reading your poem, I had visions of lots of girls cleaning my house, ha ha
I am kidding, I would be quite happy with just one lady and she wouldn't have to scrub unless we are bathing together,
Love it, x
Kind regards
Jersey dreamer
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Hello Begin again,
Gosh I never knew there was so many scrubbers around, ha ha,
I was quietly smiling while reading your poem, I had visions of lots of girls cleaning my house, ha ha
I am kidding, I would be quite happy with just one lady and she wouldn't have to scrub unless we are bathing together,
Love it, x
Kind regards
Jersey dreamer
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Jersey Creamer
Now someone finally got the right idea....Forget the scrubbing bubbles and bring on the Asti....
Thanks so much for the kind review. Smiles to you CArol
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
Yes, I am grinning from ear to ear!
Great rhythm and a good rhyme for the most part. Mainly, it is silly fun and I've enjoyed it immensely. Very well done.
Thanks for putting a smile on my face!
Warm wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Yes, I am grinning from ear to ear!
Great rhythm and a good rhyme for the most part. Mainly, it is silly fun and I've enjoyed it immensely. Very well done.
Thanks for putting a smile on my face!
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Kat
If you are smiling, I did my job...Hurrah! Thanks for the kind review. Smiling at you Carol
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Well, I love it! It certainly makes one think of a jolly old night out on the town with the gals. Keep having fun with your writitng. It suits you.
Pea
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Well, I love it! It certainly makes one think of a jolly old night out on the town with the gals. Keep having fun with your writitng. It suits you.
Pea
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Pea
Actually I did have lots of fun writing it...Maybe it was because Shirley challenged me or maybe it was I just needed to smile. Whichever-- I am glad you liked it. Thanks for enjoying it. Carol :)
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you are very welcome!
Comment from melyuki
Hi begin again, what a nice light hearted piece of art. I enjoyed reading this. It has a interesting flow and gives the reader a carefree feeling, just letting go, having a night with the girls. A great poem, Have a happpy night, Melyuki
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Hi begin again, what a nice light hearted piece of art. I enjoyed reading this. It has a interesting flow and gives the reader a carefree feeling, just letting go, having a night with the girls. A great poem, Have a happpy night, Melyuki
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Melyuki
Just some girls having fun....got to let your hair down once in a while, huh! Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from Belinda
Ha-ha... thanks for your smile, although you don't take me along with the scrubbing and rubbing. Even while writing it you don't have other purposes than being silly, I think this poem can go far for some people ... in scrubbing their blues away!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Ha-ha... thanks for your smile, although you don't take me along with the scrubbing and rubbing. Even while writing it you don't have other purposes than being silly, I think this poem can go far for some people ... in scrubbing their blues away!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Belinda
I tried to put you and amfunny in there but it wouldn't work out...Guess I'll have to write another one for you guys. Take care Carol
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Ha-ha, I was just joking... Thanks anyway!
Belinda
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I was just joking... Thanks anyway!
Belinda
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Belinda I was trying to make you smile girl friend...You seem to be a little too serious lately, hope every thing is okay with you. I feel like I keep offending you in some way and that is the lat thing on my mind. Smiles...Carol
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I'm okay, Carol, really, still my old self... thanks for your concern.
Comment from Arturo Palavicini
Well, you make me smile. At the end I think that was the main object Of this beautiful, and melodic poem.
Congratulations.
Arturo Palavicini
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Well, you make me smile. At the end I think that was the main object Of this beautiful, and melodic poem.
Congratulations.
Arturo Palavicini
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Arturo
Smiling was the only objective...Glad you did, Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from shy1250
LOVED this! Brought a smile to my lips and my heart! Suggestions and corrections just can't apply to this--good-natured fun and I'll bet all your pals got a kick out of their names included. Sweet, sweet, sweet! The world always needs another reason to LOL, and you just gave it one! Kudos! later and God bless, shy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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LOVED this! Brought a smile to my lips and my heart! Suggestions and corrections just can't apply to this--good-natured fun and I'll bet all your pals got a kick out of their names included. Sweet, sweet, sweet! The world always needs another reason to LOL, and you just gave it one! Kudos! later and God bless, shy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009
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Shy
I am so pleased that you enjoyed the silly little rhyming song. It was meant to just make us smile and I think it did its job. Thanks so much for the kind review. Sending a smile your way....Carol