Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Way too many characters in only 100 words. I'm totally confused and I read it twice. I started writing them down to figure it out and then said, "No way, am I going to do that." Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009

haha really? Well, if you can figure out who was who, please let me know, because I have no idea whatsoever.

Thanks for the review

Comment from WRITER1

Excellent

Wow, thank God that someone drowned. It would have been terrible to have to figure that all without the coincidence. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009

I can't help but feel that there is just a touch of sarcasm in review.

Thanks for reading and the good wishes

reply by WRITER1 on 13-Aug-2009

Ya, think?
Donna

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Did you used to watch Perry Mason when he explained how it all happened to his secretary in the end? It's also like how Monk now explains it all with his trademark - this is the way it happened line. This is quite clever - you tell the whole damned complicated story of what has obviously taken place over a great deal of time in just 100 words by having the detective sum it all up. Of course, now that you put it that way, it's obvious. LOL I dare you to write the whole story now that goes with this. :-) What a clever entry in the 100 word story contest. Brooke

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 Comment Written 13-Aug-2009

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2009

You're very kind. I'm afraid my entries are usually too clever by half, though