Comment from MaureenC

Excellent

Carol, a nice little story which has all the contest requirements. Excellent work on how you have incorporated the set words to be used.
Hugs and blessings
Maureen

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2009

Maureen

Thanks for the kind review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol

Comment from fictionwriter

Excellent

An enjoyable little story. Sometimes the hate turns to love rather than the other way around. I know, been there and done that. Well written, no spag and very enjoyable.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2009

fictionwriter

Thanks for the review. I greatly appreciate your kind comments. CArol

Comment from Mrs Jones

Excellent

This is such a sweet story and you wove the words in beautifully. Good luck in the contest. A worthy entry. I enjoyed.
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2009

Mrs. Jones Thanks for the generous review. Carol

Comment from MJMuraco

Excellent

You did an excellent job with this 100 word story. I enjoyed the red highlighting to enhance certain points. It is a very good entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 31-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2009

MJMuraco

Thanks for the review. Writing a story with so few words is a real challenge. Thanks for stopping by. Carol

Comment from armygrl43

Excellent

The classic love story. From young to older falling in love. I enjoyed the line about the fireworks going off in her eyes when they kissed.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2009

armygirl

Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it very much. Carol

Comment from Diny

Excellent

Sweet story- and I might add I do prefer the happy ending ones!- Write ON!
and good luck to you on this contest- DINY

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2009

DINY

Lately I prefer the happy endings too! Makers people smile instead of all the frowns. Thanks for the review. Carol

Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

Wow!
You've written a story that measures several years, in just 150 words. That is quite a feat! LOL

This was fun to read.
The dialogue was believable and the ending was satisfying.
Great work, Begin Again!
Good luck in the contest.
Nic

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2009

Nicnac

Thank you for the review. It was hard to cram a lifetime into so few words..but a fun challenge. Thanks again CArol

Comment from blondiedots

Excellent

Very sweet little story with excellent usage of required words. Dialogue- Well done and easy to understand. Nicely creative in the few words allowed- Bravo and blessings in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2009

blondiedots

Thanks for the kind review. Cramming a lifetime into 150 words was definitely a challenge. Thanks again Carol

Comment from drivenbackward

Excellent

A nice story, Begin Again. Seen this done before, but you still pulled it off well. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2009

drivenbackward

Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate it. Carol

Comment from Thesis

Excellent

A cute story that spans a number of years in few words.

You captured the phonemon of "teasing because I really like you", well.

Good luck in the contest. - Thesis

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2009

Thesis

A span of years can change a lot about how we think. Thanks for the review. Carol