Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Excellent Teri,
What a mind stirring and disturbing story and you did wonders using the required words
I wish you the best in this contest..
Gert

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2009

Thanks Gert for the great review. Hugs, Teri

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

You have done really very well my friend this is very creative contest entry and was an enjoyable read good luck in the contest regards Fuller

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2009

Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri

Comment from rmdelta

Excellent

teri,

an excellent little contest entry, my friend. This is a well written story with great descriptives and they allow us to visualize the scene. Great work

Reggie

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 Comment Written 29-Jul-2009

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2009

Thank you my friend for the great review. Hugs, Teri