POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from blondiedots
This is so great- sucking up at its finest! Short and sweet, can't be beat- message heard in every word- like your style, made me smile! :)
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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This is so great- sucking up at its finest! Short and sweet, can't be beat- message heard in every word- like your style, made me smile! :)
Comment Written 24-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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blondiedots...
Thanks for your kind review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from Steve Pantazis
This is the kind of poetry that makes me smile: direct, funny and nicely crafted. Sometimes the best things in life are the simple ones. Here's to you for a job well done!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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This is the kind of poetry that makes me smile: direct, funny and nicely crafted. Sometimes the best things in life are the simple ones. Here's to you for a job well done!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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Pantazis All said in jest, of course. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from another jim
The entries in this contest have been great; yours is no exception. After all, how could anyone ignore your very creative bribe... I mean, poem? Nice job.
Not competing so I can't vote, but if I could, a bushel basket full of hundred dollar bills would all but guarantee that I'd vote for your entry.
Good luck.
P.S. You're going up against gooey chocolate cake...
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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The entries in this contest have been great; yours is no exception. After all, how could anyone ignore your very creative bribe... I mean, poem? Nice job.
Not competing so I can't vote, but if I could, a bushel basket full of hundred dollar bills would all but guarantee that I'd vote for your entry.
Good luck.
P.S. You're going up against gooey chocolate cake...
Comment Written 24-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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Another jim The gooey chocolate cake hooked me from the start. Thanks for the kind review. Carol
Comment from frelanz
Cool poem and oh so true! Well written and great words chosen! Enjoyed reading this and had to laugh and read it again and again and again... :-D Perfect how it is! Short and to the point and that's all you need. Well done :-) Dawn
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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Cool poem and oh so true! Well written and great words chosen! Enjoyed reading this and had to laugh and read it again and again and again... :-D Perfect how it is! Short and to the point and that's all you need. Well done :-) Dawn
Comment Written 24-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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Dawn Thanks for taking the time to review. I greatly appreciate it. Carol
Comment from DecrepitOldBag
LMAO! Nice one. This really takes the biscuits in the 'suck-up' contest. I am still chuckling. Very witty and great fun. Good luck in the contest.
Warm wishes
Kat
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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LMAO! Nice one. This really takes the biscuits in the 'suck-up' contest. I am still chuckling. Very witty and great fun. Good luck in the contest.
Warm wishes
Kat
Comment Written 24-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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Kat... I'm pleased that I could make you laugh since that's what this crazy contest was all about. I appreciate your kind and generous review. Have a nice day Carol
Comment from fayesh
A bit drastic - don't you think for just member dollars. If you have money, you don't need to win. If you're offering sex - have you taken a gander at some of these people? LOL
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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A bit drastic - don't you think for just member dollars. If you have money, you don't need to win. If you're offering sex - have you taken a gander at some of these people? LOL
Comment Written 24-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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fayesh you are oh so right! My alter ego wrote this in the middle of the night and then skipped town, leaving me holding the bag. Can't even trust yourself to write the right thing when $$$$$ is involved. Carol
Comment from jomwriter
This is a perfect "2-line suck-up" writing prompt entry. Who wouldn't want to hear this? I don't know if I could have accomplished this in so few words.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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This is a perfect "2-line suck-up" writing prompt entry. Who wouldn't want to hear this? I don't know if I could have accomplished this in so few words.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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jomwriter Thanks for the review and encouraging words. I am glad that it was all done in jest though or I'd have to hide for a long time. Carol
Comment from palsuresh
As you said, this is really not a fair deal, yet I shall accept it for 90 member dollars.
This seems to be a very strong and alluring entry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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As you said, this is really not a fair deal, yet I shall accept it for 90 member dollars.
This seems to be a very strong and alluring entry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2009
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palsuresh Seems we can get about anything this way without having to twist any arms. Certainly glad it was all said in jest. Have a nice day Carol
Comment from bjt6
I'll take the money, but I'll pass on the sex, thanks;) This is great! So funny and clever. I like how you used a phrase that is usually thought of in reference to the Bible, and tweaked it to make it so naughty. Great contest entry. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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I'll take the money, but I'll pass on the sex, thanks;) This is great! So funny and clever. I like how you used a phrase that is usually thought of in reference to the Bible, and tweaked it to make it so naughty. Great contest entry. Best of luck!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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bjt6...I think my alter ego wrote this because I certainly would be bright red if asked to say something like it. Glad it's all in jest. Thanks for the review. Carol
Comment from jmyron
Tempting, so very tempting. . . But alas, I am a Mormon. The idea of a two line haiku is knew to me, but I am getting to get a feel for it, and seen several in this contest that are very cleasver.
John
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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Tempting, so very tempting. . . But alas, I am a Mormon. The idea of a two line haiku is knew to me, but I am getting to get a feel for it, and seen several in this contest that are very cleasver.
John
Comment Written 23-Jul-2009
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2009
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John...Totally knew to me too. My alter ego gave it a try and this is where it landed me. Thanks for the review. I appreciate it. Carol