CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from The Cowboy Poet
I like your sense of humor and obvious wit. I often wonder what women are thinking when I see those "tramp stamps". Don't they know they'll still be there when they're older and have more sense? How will they look then? I like your take on it. The poem read easily with good fluidity. The rhyme pattern was consistent and the subject quite humorous. I liked it. Rhymeman.
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I like your sense of humor and obvious wit. I often wonder what women are thinking when I see those "tramp stamps". Don't they know they'll still be there when they're older and have more sense? How will they look then? I like your take on it. The poem read easily with good fluidity. The rhyme pattern was consistent and the subject quite humorous. I liked it. Rhymeman.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from jclark
Now this is hilarious! Excellent verse and so fun to read. You are one talented lady and I appreciate your great sense of humor. I have to admit, I don't get these young people and their tats and piercings. Can't wait to see some of them in their 80's...oh wait...I WON'T! LOL
Kindly,
Judy
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Now this is hilarious! Excellent verse and so fun to read. You are one talented lady and I appreciate your great sense of humor. I have to admit, I don't get these young people and their tats and piercings. Can't wait to see some of them in their 80's...oh wait...I WON'T! LOL
Kindly,
Judy
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from amada
Tramp stamp the writig was fun. There are many ladies out there wearing that badge, and not necessarily inked, if you know how I mean...the nasty me is appearing...LOL
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Tramp stamp the writig was fun. There are many ladies out there wearing that badge, and not necessarily inked, if you know how I mean...the nasty me is appearing...LOL
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from jojosug
I must confess to really disliking tattoos or body art, but others seem to love it! A great poem, well written, with wry humour and definitely tongue in cheek.
Jo
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I must confess to really disliking tattoos or body art, but others seem to love it! A great poem, well written, with wry humour and definitely tongue in cheek.
Jo
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from Carol D Parker
What a fun poem. It'd delightful. Flowing language , words that draw you in. Worry that you were realy getting one. So glad you didn't. Great work.
Delora
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What a fun poem. It'd delightful. Flowing language , words that draw you in. Worry that you were realy getting one. So glad you didn't. Great work.
Delora
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from BethShelby
This is so funny. I've never heard it called and tramp stamp but that is a good name for it. You poem rhymes so well and is fun to read. My daughter has a big butterfly on her back. I wonder if she knows its a tramp stamp. hmmm
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This is so funny. I've never heard it called and tramp stamp but that is a good name for it. You poem rhymes so well and is fun to read. My daughter has a big butterfly on her back. I wonder if she knows its a tramp stamp. hmmm
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from jlsavell
sixteezkid, this is absolutely entertaining and fantastically clever. I have to say, I at one time wanted a tramp stamp[never heard that term before..lol]but only on my ankle. Thank goodness i claimed my sense before I did any thing drastic. Very cute this poem is..jlsavell
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sixteezkid, this is absolutely entertaining and fantastically clever. I have to say, I at one time wanted a tramp stamp[never heard that term before..lol]but only on my ankle. Thank goodness i claimed my sense before I did any thing drastic. Very cute this poem is..jlsavell
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from Annelisa
I love it! This is so much fun. I wonder if I should get one??? The rhymes are fun and you about convinced me...maybe I'm having a midlife crisis.
Anyway. Fantastic!
Annelisa
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I love it! This is so much fun. I wonder if I should get one??? The rhymes are fun and you about convinced me...maybe I'm having a midlife crisis.
Anyway. Fantastic!
Annelisa
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from words
And,oh what fun it is!
Loved the art...that is a visual poem all of its own.
What wicked fun, the openig stanza is: think I'll get a tramp stamp
These tats are all the rage
Why not--they're hot
The goods? I got...
Who cares about my age.
Love that you write about the simple things of our lives...all of the best poets do that.
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And,oh what fun it is!
Loved the art...that is a visual poem all of its own.
What wicked fun, the openig stanza is: think I'll get a tramp stamp
These tats are all the rage
Why not--they're hot
The goods? I got...
Who cares about my age.
Love that you write about the simple things of our lives...all of the best poets do that.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009
Comment from mslyla216
Well, you had so much fun with this poem, perhaps you SHOULD try the ink and see what happens. THis is a completely hilarious and just for fun poem. I enjoyed your cleverness found in this and applud your chosen poetry style. It works wonderfully. My favorite? "Backed out -- had doubt, walked in, walked out". Good writing. mslyla
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Well, you had so much fun with this poem, perhaps you SHOULD try the ink and see what happens. THis is a completely hilarious and just for fun poem. I enjoyed your cleverness found in this and applud your chosen poetry style. It works wonderfully. My favorite? "Backed out -- had doubt, walked in, walked out". Good writing. mslyla
Comment Written 01-Apr-2009