A Leaf on the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Dear God, Why?"Autobiography of abuse
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Comment from WRITER1
Another good chapter, I would have disowned those people along time ago. You did and excellent job on this piece.
Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Another good chapter, I would have disowned those people along time ago. You did and excellent job on this piece.
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Than you for your kind review.
Comment from Julasif
This is a very easy, enjoyable read. You have managed to capture character's emotions well. The plot is sufficient to keep you wanting more. The description of the house was very vivid..(in fact, it kinda reminds me of my house. Maybe I should get off this site and do a little house work..lol) Great work!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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This is a very easy, enjoyable read. You have managed to capture character's emotions well. The plot is sufficient to keep you wanting more. The description of the house was very vivid..(in fact, it kinda reminds me of my house. Maybe I should get off this site and do a little house work..lol) Great work!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your kind, and amusing, review. I sincerely appreciate it.
Comment from shimmeringlights
This is so sad, I don't understand how people can be so careless and disrespectful. Well written and I hope life has gotten better. A couple of things I noticed:
Nothing could have prepared (us)for what we saw.
Neither Mom(,) nor I knew where Denise had gone, so contacting her was impossible.
Mom proceeded to write a letter to Denise, Mary, (and) Teresa.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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This is so sad, I don't understand how people can be so careless and disrespectful. Well written and I hope life has gotten better. A couple of things I noticed:
Nothing could have prepared (us)for what we saw.
Neither Mom(,) nor I knew where Denise had gone, so contacting her was impossible.
Mom proceeded to write a letter to Denise, Mary, (and) Teresa.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your kind review. I sincerely appreciate it and your helpful suggestions.
Comment from prodigal
Wow. I am amazed at some people. Your mom was royally screwed. She should have sued her. This is another very well penned chapter. Your writing is so easy to follow. Well done- Sam
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Wow. I am amazed at some people. Your mom was royally screwed. She should have sued her. This is another very well penned chapter. Your writing is so easy to follow. Well done- Sam
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your kind review. I sincerely appreciate it. It takes money to sue someone, unfortunately. I just wasn't worth the emotional, physical, and financial strain.