A Leaf on the Wind
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Comment from Cranial Thinker
This is strange it confused me, a big blowout at the hospital and now they get you an apartment to be by your mom so you can help her if she should need it.Bell's went off in my head when they said senior center,as its always some body watching the goings and comings in places like that,so it lead me to think it was a blind set up for you.This is so good,please send me more.Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009
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This is strange it confused me, a big blowout at the hospital and now they get you an apartment to be by your mom so you can help her if she should need it.Bell's went off in my head when they said senior center,as its always some body watching the goings and comings in places like that,so it lead me to think it was a blind set up for you.This is so good,please send me more.Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009
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Yes, it was definitely a set up. More to come! Thanks for the high rating.
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You are very welcomed,Smurphgirl.Cranial Thinker
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Sometimes family members do feel they no what is best and try to take over although there is usually a motive to it you have done well an enjoyable piece easy to follow and understand no spag well done regards Fuller
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Sometimes family members do feel they no what is best and try to take over although there is usually a motive to it you have done well an enjoyable piece easy to follow and understand no spag well done regards Fuller
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009
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Thank you. Yes, sadly there was an ulterior motive. I ap preciate your high rating and kind review.
Comment from Deejharrington
A very good chapter! It brings up some interesting questions that I'm sure will be answered in upcoming chapters. Aren't families wonderful? Just rush right in and make decisions. So true in real life. Good writing.
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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009
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A very good chapter! It brings up some interesting questions that I'm sure will be answered in upcoming chapters. Aren't families wonderful? Just rush right in and make decisions. So true in real life. Good writing.
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Comment Written 27-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2009
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Thanks for the kind review. You comment "aren't families wonderful" made me laugh. I sinceely appreciate your kind review and high rating.