A Leaf on the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "Living in a Fish Bowl"Autobiography of abuse
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Comment from BethShelby
This story is proceeding well and you are continueing to tell it in a way that is interesting and keeps the reader waiting to learn more. Valerie is able to handle a lot more than most people, working long hours, raising to children and doing all that work on the house and yard.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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This story is proceeding well and you are continueing to tell it in a way that is interesting and keeps the reader waiting to learn more. Valerie is able to handle a lot more than most people, working long hours, raising to children and doing all that work on the house and yard.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Thank you for your kind review. Having an obsessive personality does have its occasional upside. Again, thank you for your high rating.
Comment from Badjuju
Another excellent chapter to an intriguing story. I have become quite immersed in your narrative. What a creative fix for the leak in the ceiling, by the way. Great job.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Another excellent chapter to an intriguing story. I have become quite immersed in your narrative. What a creative fix for the leak in the ceiling, by the way. Great job.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2009
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Thank you. I thought it was a pretty nifty idea too. I appreciate your kind review and high rating.