A Leaf on the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Irrational Fears"Autobiography of abuse
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Comment from BethShelby
This is so interesting and sad at the same time. You tell your story so well and it keeps the reader engrossed until the last line. It makes me want to go back and read what I have missed. Your dialogue is smooth and I am getting a good picture of what Richard is like.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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This is so interesting and sad at the same time. You tell your story so well and it keeps the reader engrossed until the last line. It makes me want to go back and read what I have missed. Your dialogue is smooth and I am getting a good picture of what Richard is like.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you so much for your king reviw. I appreciate you opinion.
Comment from laurelp
Your marriage was less than perfect, that is for sure. With all the problems you had, I completely understand. As always, it was well written and with great honesty.
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Your marriage was less than perfect, that is for sure. With all the problems you had, I completely understand. As always, it was well written and with great honesty.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thank you again, for your kind review. I have grown to look forward to you comments.
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How very nice of you to say that. thank you.
Comment from The Rivaling Mimic
This I found to be most excellent. Your presentation was especially attractive to be for the font size hehe. Okay, I admit I haven't the greatest eyesight but I do know what I just read I like. I can't complain, it was definitely creative.
The Rivaling Mimic
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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This I found to be most excellent. Your presentation was especially attractive to be for the font size hehe. Okay, I admit I haven't the greatest eyesight but I do know what I just read I like. I can't complain, it was definitely creative.
The Rivaling Mimic
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Thak yiou foryou kind review...and I'm blind in one eye and have poor eyesight in the other...so I know what you are saying.Y
Comment from adewpearl
Sounds like you were not the only one with issues in this marriage - while you had your own secret fears, he was planning and planning changes to a house that he never made whilst instead buying stereo equipment - that makes for a bad situation when both people are dealing with things they do not explain to the other. You depict this most convincingly.
Brooke
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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Sounds like you were not the only one with issues in this marriage - while you had your own secret fears, he was planning and planning changes to a house that he never made whilst instead buying stereo equipment - that makes for a bad situation when both people are dealing with things they do not explain to the other. You depict this most convincingly.
Brooke
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2009
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Yes. You are correct. We were strangers who occupied the same house....communication on either side was sorely lacking. Thank your kind review.