CSP: A Collection of Poems
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42 total reviews
Comment from Scarlettdreams
They say that when one door closes another one opens. I like the optimism in this well worded little piece. Well done. Bravo Bravo
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They say that when one door closes another one opens. I like the optimism in this well worded little piece. Well done. Bravo Bravo
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from Poetic Friend
Sue, this is inspirational and motivational, especially in these tough economical times.
With minimal words, you expressed words that has a lifetime of significance --one door closs, another opens.
Great job, as usual.
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Sue, this is inspirational and motivational, especially in these tough economical times.
With minimal words, you expressed words that has a lifetime of significance --one door closs, another opens.
Great job, as usual.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2009
Comment from FredCollingwood
Door slams--finality
A knob turn yields futility
Another to open
I look for the key
Short, sweet, profound. I love it!
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Door slams--finality
A knob turn yields futility
Another to open
I look for the key
Short, sweet, profound. I love it!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
Comment from sara-beth
I like the message you are sending out here, we must persevere, especially the dreamers and creators and inventors and thinkers; there is always another door, somewhere.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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I like the message you are sending out here, we must persevere, especially the dreamers and creators and inventors and thinkers; there is always another door, somewhere.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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Yes, there is ALWAYS another door. Sometimes, we need the patience, but it's there. Thanks very much for your generous review and comments. Sue
Comment from Lynar
I enjoyed the depth in meaning in your Naani Poem. It was a very short version of endurance in a time of life that was most trying in a personal relationship.
The artwork was most pleasing effective to illustrate the 25 syllables in your poem. Your great words of encouragement, I would recommend to my friends. Excellent was Opportunities. No adverse comments.
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I enjoyed the depth in meaning in your Naani Poem. It was a very short version of endurance in a time of life that was most trying in a personal relationship.
The artwork was most pleasing effective to illustrate the 25 syllables in your poem. Your great words of encouragement, I would recommend to my friends. Excellent was Opportunities. No adverse comments.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
Comment from Annelisa
A very well done naani poem. I love the message. it is clear, concise and precise. Your picture is perfect. Good luck. Annelisa
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A very well done naani poem. I love the message. it is clear, concise and precise. Your picture is perfect. Good luck. Annelisa
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi sue....this is an excellent Naani poem...one of the best I have read so far. The picture you chose just serves to enhance the profound message. Well done....good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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Hi sue....this is an excellent Naani poem...one of the best I have read so far. The picture you chose just serves to enhance the profound message. Well done....good luck in the contest....blessings...chey
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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Chey, thanks so much for your lovely compliments! And for your very kind review. With regards, Sue
Comment from mslyla216
This is a very nice naani poem and a good entry into the contest. Your meaning in this poem is similar to the old saying "When God closes one door, he opens a window." This is the writer looking for another key when that first door closed with finality. Very good writing with perfect imagery. mslyla
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This is a very nice naani poem and a good entry into the contest. Your meaning in this poem is similar to the old saying "When God closes one door, he opens a window." This is the writer looking for another key when that first door closed with finality. Very good writing with perfect imagery. mslyla
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
Comment from Cedar
I love reading these short pieces. Sometimes I get more out of just a few words than I do reading an entire page.
Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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I love reading these short pieces. Sometimes I get more out of just a few words than I do reading an entire page.
Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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Yes, that's the beauty of these small poetic formats. One needs to select each word that will bring the biggest message. Very challenging and fun at the same time. Thanks very much for your kind review. Sue
Comment from EdwardVal
I think this is a very expressive piece and says alot in very few words. Also this was well written and you followed the contests rules to a T. Take care and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
E'Val
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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I think this is a very expressive piece and says alot in very few words. Also this was well written and you followed the contests rules to a T. Take care and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
E'Val
Comment Written 14-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2009
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E'Val, thank you very much for your kind review and comments. Always appreciated, Sue
