CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from fastdigits
An unusual but very effective
use of the juxtaposition of
the earth and planting of bulbs
to that of a man and a woman
meeting and the seeds of romance
being planted by perhaps a glance
and then see what will bloom out
of that togetherness.
Artistically presented poem
for this contest.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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An unusual but very effective
use of the juxtaposition of
the earth and planting of bulbs
to that of a man and a woman
meeting and the seeds of romance
being planted by perhaps a glance
and then see what will bloom out
of that togetherness.
Artistically presented poem
for this contest.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Thank you for seeing the duality of this piece. Definitely a shared love for gardening and the ongoing planting needed for an everlasting romance. And thank you for your very generous review and kind words. With regards, Sue
Comment from Dave-Aranda-Richards
Your word painting really enlightened the art which set off this delightful piece. Love spring and the blooming bulbs it brings.
dave
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Your word painting really enlightened the art which set off this delightful piece. Love spring and the blooming bulbs it brings.
dave
Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
Comment from Firefly54
Ummm... a very subtle little poem... but yes, there is something about planting bulbs together that suggests a shared future. I like it. Hope you are planting the bulbs for many happy years.
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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Ummm... a very subtle little poem... but yes, there is something about planting bulbs together that suggests a shared future. I like it. Hope you are planting the bulbs for many happy years.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2009
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Hoping it isn't too subtle. 15 words is very challenging to make a metaphor. But, you honed in on it. Thank you so much for your very kind review and comments. With regards, Sue
Comment from jaeladarling
Ah, the poem of a loving gardener tending the flowers. My mom plants flowers everywhere when the weather permits too. Great poem, with anticipation of Spring. Thanks for sharing!
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Ah, the poem of a loving gardener tending the flowers. My mom plants flowers everywhere when the weather permits too. Great poem, with anticipation of Spring. Thanks for sharing!
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2009