CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 68 "High and Mighty"A collection of poetry
33 total reviews
Comment from Minglement
Well, you nailed this one! Very good description and flow, and carrying a great message, as well. Don't we all know someone like this? Well done!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Well, you nailed this one! Very good description and flow, and carrying a great message, as well. Don't we all know someone like this? Well done!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Thank goodness they only come in "sprinkles" - ha!! If there were too many of them around us, we might have a misdemeanor on a rap sheet! LOL!! Thanks for your great review. Always appreciated, Sue
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Ain't that the truth~ Great job. Take care, Marcia
Comment from XR15
Hi Again
I think you've really got the measure of this format. I read all the last contest ones and you seemed to be the only one who really mirrors around the central line which is what I think they need to make them work. (But then that's maybe just me)
Sonnet on way - may be a few days - real world needs dealt with lol
Chris
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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Hi Again
I think you've really got the measure of this format. I read all the last contest ones and you seemed to be the only one who really mirrors around the central line which is what I think they need to make them work. (But then that's maybe just me)
Sonnet on way - may be a few days - real world needs dealt with lol
Chris
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2009
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OH!! I'm so thrilled to hear that!! After you deal with the real world, hunker down and write one. Betcha it will be much easier this time around. Thanks for remarking on the "central line". That's where I like to work up to build the story and then back again. Thanks for your great review and comments. Can't wait to see your next work! With regards, Sue
Comment from chaswriter
Sue - I didn't realize that you knew me that well. Well, la-ti-da. I am always getting these poem structures mixed up. Good job on this one. I enjoyed it. Charlie.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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Sue - I didn't realize that you knew me that well. Well, la-ti-da. I am always getting these poem structures mixed up. Good job on this one. I enjoyed it. Charlie.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2009
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Hey, how did I miss this review?? Well, la-ti-da!! Ha!! Who let the cat out of the bag that this was for you? It was to be kept under wraps!! Speaking of haughty, I just ran into one of the haughtiest chaps I've read on FS. Boy, did we have it out! LOL!! Haughty is only the tip of the iceberg on this guy. Whaddya gonna do? Fuhgeddaboutit! That's what. Sorry I missed your review here. Thanks very much, Charlie. As always, I love to hear from you. :-) Sue
Comment from skye
Each word is essential in describing haughty, a word we do not use much in everyday language anymore.
I love the Victorian feeling it evokes, the utter superiority in its use.
Well done.
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Each word is essential in describing haughty, a word we do not use much in everyday language anymore.
I love the Victorian feeling it evokes, the utter superiority in its use.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
Comment from Aurora C. Borealis
Very good! I really like this. It fits very well in this format! And the picture is just priceless, complementing this nicely. Well done!
~Aurora C. :)
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Very good! I really like this. It fits very well in this format! And the picture is just priceless, complementing this nicely. Well done!
~Aurora C. :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
Comment from joan marie
I love the artwork, it was perfect for this poem. Talk about getting the big head. I like these poems, are you doing a series for a book. It seems a lot of your topics are dealing with this subject matter. joan marie
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I love the artwork, it was perfect for this poem. Talk about getting the big head. I like these poems, are you doing a series for a book. It seems a lot of your topics are dealing with this subject matter. joan marie
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
Comment from bard owl
Ah, a lesson in ethics. Your rictameter voices the duality of personality often found in those who feel superior to others. The picture you have chosen is perfect for this well-done poem. Excellent. Blessings, Linda
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Ah, a lesson in ethics. Your rictameter voices the duality of personality often found in those who feel superior to others. The picture you have chosen is perfect for this well-done poem. Excellent. Blessings, Linda
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
Comment from DreamChaser
The world has far too many people who are like this. You've described their characteristics quite well. Being arrogant and full of one's self, is not a pleasant quality. Great picture also.
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The world has far too many people who are like this. You've described their characteristics quite well. Being arrogant and full of one's self, is not a pleasant quality. Great picture also.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
Comment from Judian James
You seem to really like these Sue and you've mastered them nicely. I just can't stick to one form over and over. I have to mix it up daily. It seems to be the way my mind works! Well done as always.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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You seem to really like these Sue and you've mastered them nicely. I just can't stick to one form over and over. I have to mix it up daily. It seems to be the way my mind works! Well done as always.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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I have a mixture out there. Just like adding another ric to mix. Love 'em. I want to do a series of rics on various human virtues, attributes and the not-so-nice. Form lends itself well for that. Thanks for your review, Jude. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from dportwood
Perfect picture of my father. Your rictameter is nicely shaped, filled with great word choices, and easy-reading. Good job.
Duane
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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Perfect picture of my father. Your rictameter is nicely shaped, filled with great word choices, and easy-reading. Good job.
Duane
Comment Written 02-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2009
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Duane, sorry, but I had to crack up at your saying that. Just the way you said it. Thanks for commenting on the shape as well. And for your very kind review. Always, Sue