CSP: A Collection of Poems
Viewing comments for Chapter 70 "Jackie"A collection of poetry
29 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
A sonnet to your dog. How sweet is that? Isn't Bobbie the least bit upset? Have you read this one aloud to Jackie yet? Look at that face! excellent
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
  |
A sonnet to your dog. How sweet is that? Isn't Bobbie the least bit upset? Have you read this one aloud to Jackie yet? Look at that face! excellent
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2009
-
I didn't tell Bobbie yet. Gonna surprise her with a Minute Poem. Ha! Thanks so much for your review, Jude. Always appreciated, Sue
Comment from Poetic Friend
Jackie is such a beuatiful dog and so is this poem. Based upon your poem, I can tell you have such a great relationship with her.
I wrote a similar poem about a dog. I titled it "Dog's Best Friend."
The last line is so adorable!
|
Jackie is such a beuatiful dog and so is this poem. Based upon your poem, I can tell you have such a great relationship with her.
I wrote a similar poem about a dog. I titled it "Dog's Best Friend."
The last line is so adorable!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Sixteezkid, I love this poem. I have two Scottish Terriers who live for love, food, and creating havoc--in random order. It just depends on the time of day, However, I love them dearly and that's all that matters. Good luck in the contest.
|
Sixteezkid, I love this poem. I have two Scottish Terriers who live for love, food, and creating havoc--in random order. It just depends on the time of day, However, I love them dearly and that's all that matters. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
Comment from Amicus
This is a lovely poem which conveys effectively your love for your pet (and hers for you) without using the word love. Technically the poem is flawless. I could see nothing needing revision.
Terrific job.
|
This is a lovely poem which conveys effectively your love for your pet (and hers for you) without using the word love. Technically the poem is flawless. I could see nothing needing revision.
Terrific job.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2009
Comment from Dreamdancer
Big smile,
Anything to do with dogs has my vote! I really like the picture which compliments the write... Good luck my friend... Dreamdancer
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
|
Big smile,
Anything to do with dogs has my vote! I really like the picture which compliments the write... Good luck my friend... Dreamdancer
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
-
Hey, saw the pump. So cool of you! Thanks very much. Yeah, I shoulda known. Of course you would like this!! HA! I've had Jackie and Bobbie highly trained, but all my fault that I "relaxed" the rules. They know the loopholes now. HA!!! But, they are good girls. Thanks for your great review and the promotion!! Best to you, dreamer...Sue
Comment from Hitcher
You are a big softy aren't you my friend! I do like dogs so I'll let you off, but NOT on the sofa! I have promised the girls to get them one this year but I can see problems ahead because my darling wife is a dogs in a kennel outside kinda girl and I'm a dog in the house protecting the family kinda man. It is going to an interesting one that's for sure! Nice poem you big SOFTY! ha ha.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
|
You are a big softy aren't you my friend! I do like dogs so I'll let you off, but NOT on the sofa! I have promised the girls to get them one this year but I can see problems ahead because my darling wife is a dogs in a kennel outside kinda girl and I'm a dog in the house protecting the family kinda man. It is going to an interesting one that's for sure! Nice poem you big SOFTY! ha ha.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
-
My Jackie would kill for me. She is so protective of us. So, I'm like you....an "inside protecting the house kinda gal". HA! My Jackie....I always give her big hugs and say to her, "Pure dingo love". LOL Thanks for your review. What kinda dog do you want to get?
-
Rhodesian ridgeback! Awesome dogs!
-
I had one of those! When I lived in Brisbane. She was stolen from us!! What a great personality! Great choice, Hitch.
Comment from JoAnna Lee
How sweet... and such a cute doggie! Nicely written and without the "love" words. Good job... and good luck.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
|
How sweet... and such a cute doggie! Nicely written and without the "love" words. Good job... and good luck.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
Comment from Joan E.
And, I know from your poem that Jackie's love is unconditional. You've really painted a clear picture of "your best friend". I was quite taken by the image you created in the last line with your use of "curl"--so visual and comforting.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
|
And, I know from your poem that Jackie's love is unconditional. You've really painted a clear picture of "your best friend". I was quite taken by the image you created in the last line with your use of "curl"--so visual and comforting.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
-
SO unconditional!! She follows me from room to room. Ha! She's my shadow. Laying at my feet now on the sofa. Thanks so much for your review, Joan. Hope all is well with you. :-)) Sue
Comment from MJMuraco
What a delightful poem about your furry best friend. It flowed nicely and your dog's love for you shined through. She is really cute and I don't care what anyone says, Dog's are man's best friend.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
|
What a delightful poem about your furry best friend. It flowed nicely and your dog's love for you shined through. She is really cute and I don't care what anyone says, Dog's are man's best friend.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
-
Yes, she's 10 years old now. My "other' child. Thanks so much for your lovely review and kind remarks. With regards, Sue
Comment from adewpearl
I'll rub your belly, let's curl up together - awwwwww that is so damned adorable :-) What a great love poem to Jackie without using any of the cliched love words - the scenes you set are so tender and "wet." LOL Gotta love those morning wake up kisses! ;-) Brooke
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
|
I'll rub your belly, let's curl up together - awwwwww that is so damned adorable :-) What a great love poem to Jackie without using any of the cliched love words - the scenes you set are so tender and "wet." LOL Gotta love those morning wake up kisses! ;-) Brooke
Comment Written 31-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2009
-
Jackie dies and goes to heaven when I rub her belly! HA! It's so strange...even if I look in her eyes, she won't look away. All she wants is my love. I've never seen anything like it before. HA!! Thanks so much for your lovely comments, Brooke and your review. Always, Sue