CSP: A Collection of Poems
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Comment from rhymelord
Quite a tribute to a beautiful city. In spite of "No set metre", it still has a lovely beat and is "Tres magnifique".
Au Revoir
That's exhausted my French.
REgards,
Reg
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Quite a tribute to a beautiful city. In spite of "No set metre", it still has a lovely beat and is "Tres magnifique".
Au Revoir
That's exhausted my French.
REgards,
Reg
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from ulster3
Hi sixteez.
You took me back to a time I was in Paris. This is a wonderful poem which gives an excellent expression to that city. I much enjoyed this read. Thanks. Rebecca
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Hi sixteez.
You took me back to a time I was in Paris. This is a wonderful poem which gives an excellent expression to that city. I much enjoyed this read. Thanks. Rebecca
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
Comment from mslyla216
This is a beautiful poem about a beautiful city. I, too, love Paris. It is in a world unto its own. I'd told my husband we had to go see the Louvre before I died. I hope to have many years left and perhaps will visit again. You did leave out the Musee D'orsay where all the impressionist paintings are. I do so hope you saw it as well. For one who has visited Paris and the scenes and sites you so visually describe, this poem is a true pleasure. mslyla
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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This is a beautiful poem about a beautiful city. I, too, love Paris. It is in a world unto its own. I'd told my husband we had to go see the Louvre before I died. I hope to have many years left and perhaps will visit again. You did leave out the Musee D'orsay where all the impressionist paintings are. I do so hope you saw it as well. For one who has visited Paris and the scenes and sites you so visually describe, this poem is a true pleasure. mslyla
Comment Written 20-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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I LOVE the Musee D'orsay! Am crazy about the impressionists. Great Rodin bronzes there, also. Yes, if one gets the chance, the Louvre is a must-see. I would LOVE to go to the Hermitage in St Petersburg one day. I do love art. Thank you for sharing your trip to Paris! And for your great review. Much appreciated...Sue
Comment from Nedrajean
Such a delightful way to leave the house! I've never been to Paris but you have painted a lovely picture (and the photo is exceptionally fitting). Most enjoyable.
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Such a delightful way to leave the house! I've never been to Paris but you have painted a lovely picture (and the photo is exceptionally fitting). Most enjoyable.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from Curt Mongold
Never been cuz, but it sounds awesome. The history and the art alone is worth the trip, let alone the vinyards and food!
Fantastic descriptions in vivid word use make this piece come alive.
Great stuff!
Curt
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Never been cuz, but it sounds awesome. The history and the art alone is worth the trip, let alone the vinyards and food!
Fantastic descriptions in vivid word use make this piece come alive.
Great stuff!
Curt
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2009
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Speaking of one of my favorite subjects (history), I was thinking of doing another poetry trip and go to Rome! Wow! Yes, the history and art alone in Paris is worth the trip. I also love French architecture. Thanks very much, Cuz, for the review. :-)) Suz
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Speaking of one of my favorite subjects (history), I was thinking of doing another poetry trip and go to Rome! Wow! Yes, the history and art alone in Paris is worth the trip. I also love French architecture. Thanks very much, Cuz, for the review. :-)) Suz
Comment from Miska
A beautiful word picture of Paris complimented by the art work. I read it a couple of times just to go there again. thank you for sharing. best regards Miska
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A beautiful word picture of Paris complimented by the art work. I read it a couple of times just to go there again. thank you for sharing. best regards Miska
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from volunteer angel
You would make a good tour guide. Your description of that beautiful city is well done! I've never been there but reading this, makes me want to go. "The boats are lit up floating gently down the River Seine!" Great job! V.A.
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You would make a good tour guide. Your description of that beautiful city is well done! I've never been there but reading this, makes me want to go. "The boats are lit up floating gently down the River Seine!" Great job! V.A.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from shimmeringlights
I've never been to Paris but wish to someday go there. You're poem makes me want to go even more. Lovely descriptions and imagery, well composed, go flow and rhyme. Thanks too for the notes they were really informative.
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I've never been to Paris but wish to someday go there. You're poem makes me want to go even more. Lovely descriptions and imagery, well composed, go flow and rhyme. Thanks too for the notes they were really informative.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from Jendowoz
It is nice to travel in your mind. I often do that about places I've been. As yet that hasn't been overseas, but I hope to get there one day. I liked the serenity of your poem, and the picture and the colour you chose to display it in suits the peaceful feel to this.
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It is nice to travel in your mind. I often do that about places I've been. As yet that hasn't been overseas, but I hope to get there one day. I liked the serenity of your poem, and the picture and the colour you chose to display it in suits the peaceful feel to this.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
Comment from Rachon
Until today I've never been to Paris, but thanks to you I feel as if I've been there. Your poem was beautiful. Thank you for taking me there.
Yours,
Rachon
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Until today I've never been to Paris, but thanks to you I feel as if I've been there. Your poem was beautiful. Thank you for taking me there.
Yours,
Rachon
Comment Written 19-Jan-2009
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009
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Rachon, I'm smiling from ear to ear! So happy you could see and feel it. Makes my day! Thank you for your most generous review and compliments. With regards, Sue
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Sue,
You are most welcome!
Rachon