Comment from honeytree

Excellent

The art work was excellent and the words also.

I felt this cold chilly morning.

a cold chilly reading
wind blowing cold air

I would keep nice and warm by a fire.

great writing.

Honeytree

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009

Comment from Jazh

Excellent

I like this haiku very much, even though it made me feel chilly in front of my air conditioner! I like the way you use the "n" and "ee" sounds in the first two lines, then contrast those with "chill factor". Sorry you missed the contest. :(

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009

Comment from Brian S. Pratt

Excellent

northerlies
minus ten degrees
chill factor
--whew, makes me think of Minot, North Dakota.

well done, thanks.

brian s pratt
fantasy author

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2009