Dancing on Air
Nature haiku 35323 total reviews
Comment from whizpurr ^-^
Hi Helvi,
Your haiku is delightful. I loved the thought of the snowflakes in snow flurries being like little dancers in fluffy white tutus. Well done!
Whizpurr ^-^
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Hi Helvi,
Your haiku is delightful. I loved the thought of the snowflakes in snow flurries being like little dancers in fluffy white tutus. Well done!
Whizpurr ^-^
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from skye
Very cute haiku...
I love the image of dancing snowflakes, wearing tutus.
It is a wonderful image, and your artwork adds just the right touch.
Well done.
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Very cute haiku...
I love the image of dancing snowflakes, wearing tutus.
It is a wonderful image, and your artwork adds just the right touch.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from adewpearl
this is just utterly charming - the shaped part and then the actual 3/5/3 haiku - I love all of it - you tickle my fancy!!
snow flurries as tutus of ballerinas dancing in the air - makes me smile
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this is just utterly charming - the shaped part and then the actual 3/5/3 haiku - I love all of it - you tickle my fancy!!
snow flurries as tutus of ballerinas dancing in the air - makes me smile
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from VICTIMEYES
another cute tale, i cant read the upper words but the lower ones were great ... air ballet ... i really like that idea.
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another cute tale, i cant read the upper words but the lower ones were great ... air ballet ... i really like that idea.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
A very creative piece with very good presentation and descriptions in this limited form I enjoyed well done good luck regards Fuller
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A very creative piece with very good presentation and descriptions in this limited form I enjoyed well done good luck regards Fuller
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow
that's incredible, I wish I knew how to do some of those artsy type things. Your dancer could be a poem of its own. Great job with both.
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that's incredible, I wish I knew how to do some of those artsy type things. Your dancer could be a poem of its own. Great job with both.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Just2Write
No doubt you are a master with the word editor. I don't know how you do it, but I am in awe of you. Yes, for certain we were on the same wave length. Ballet and snow. As beautiful as swan lake. Rose.
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No doubt you are a master with the word editor. I don't know how you do it, but I am in awe of you. Yes, for certain we were on the same wave length. Ballet and snow. As beautiful as swan lake. Rose.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Karen B.
I think you have a winner here, Helvi. :) Cute poem and the artwork is equally amazing! You have an amazing talent. Good luck in the contest! Karen
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I think you have a winner here, Helvi. :) Cute poem and the artwork is equally amazing! You have an amazing talent. Good luck in the contest! Karen
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Roisin
A beautiful, descriptive haiku, celebrating the beauty of snowflakes. I really love the words you've used. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
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A beautiful, descriptive haiku, celebrating the beauty of snowflakes. I really love the words you've used. Good luck in the contest.
Warm regards.
Roisin
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Wow this is so beautiful! How do you do it?
The image is so clear and message concise.
I am in awe every time I see your stuff!
Miss hearing from you. No time for reviewing?
Love ya
J
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Wow this is so beautiful! How do you do it?
The image is so clear and message concise.
I am in awe every time I see your stuff!
Miss hearing from you. No time for reviewing?
Love ya
J
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009