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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Fine. Whatever."
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Comment from MissCellanea
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It's amazing how easily we dig in our heels to supoort our position! Great entry for the contest. I wish you the best!

Only one thing needs editing. One sentence begins without the quotation mark.

I enjoyed. Sue

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    oops! will go fix that now! thanx! :)
Comment from LadyMary
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You have told a good story, and the mood of an argument is well stated in very concise wording. The reader can easily visualize the encounter. Well done. LadyMary

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    thankyathankya :)
Comment from babylonia
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shelley,
made me smile. made me laugh. bitch and baldy. crack me up. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    hehe thanx! :)
reply by babylonia on 14-Nov-2008
    you are welcome~
Comment from Winslow
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Dear Shelly,

Great exchange I presume between an old married couple. (LOL) You really nailed this one.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    old
    young
    whatever
    lol ;-)
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Shelley thank you for showing us the real world, even much as Stan and I care for each other,sooo many times have I been through this same situtation

we are Lost,
Oh no we aren't
I just made the wrong turn

the best of luck to you in the contest.
smiles
Gert

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    LOL! thanx lots! :)
Comment from Josipher32
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I love it! This sounds like me and my husband bickering. Men are so stubborn! You can't tell them anything! ----

This is a great entry. Good luck.

Oh- and I love the title.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    hehehe thanx lots!! :-)
Comment from Teri7
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This is just too funny. It truly sounds like a man and woman when the woman thinks they are lost and the man is not going to ask for directions. Good luck. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    hehehe thanx! :)
Comment from joan marie
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Can we not all relate to this? Why is it men refuse to ask directions or look behind things in the refrigerator? I could picture them arguing, knowing each other would never give in, and then the silence of two people who have been together forever. joan marie

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    LOL! thanx! :)
Comment from starman
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*Silence Surrounds* Don't we all know that. lol. This is an excellent rat-a-tat-tat of two egos battling it out and that made for an enjoyable read.

:)s

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 Comment Written 14-Nov-2008

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2008
    hehehehehehe ;)