Lament
Free verse.32 total reviews
Comment from Judian James
A very ethereal, moody piece that I liked very much. What a visual piece as well. "Wrapped in songs from ancient souls,
conveying their lament to the night". Lovely!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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A very ethereal, moody piece that I liked very much. What a visual piece as well. "Wrapped in songs from ancient souls,
conveying their lament to the night". Lovely!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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What a terrific comment , thank you so much !
Comment from shelley kaye
"peaceful" was the first word i thought of
free easy wording flowing smoothly
didn't notice any spag or typos
nice work
thank you for sharing :-)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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"peaceful" was the first word i thought of
free easy wording flowing smoothly
didn't notice any spag or typos
nice work
thank you for sharing :-)
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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I am so grateful shelley for your kind review !
Comment from Kingsland
very very nice
I had a very big smile on my face after reading this poetic gem
for this poem is a very positive and uplifting piece to read
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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very very nice
I had a very big smile on my face after reading this poetic gem
for this poem is a very positive and uplifting piece to read
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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What a lovely reaction John ! it make y day , thank you !
Comment from Zenbud
Lovely images . . . stars losing petals - now thats a crisp and unique image I hadn't thought of! The mark of good writing, giving the reader a new perspective. Z
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Lovely images . . . stars losing petals - now thats a crisp and unique image I hadn't thought of! The mark of good writing, giving the reader a new perspective. Z
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Thank you my friend for such great review !
Comment from amada
This is a great reminder, my husband and I watched the moon's eclipse; words can't describe it. You did a great job though, "rays of light, piercing the tremulous colossus waves..." I loved this phrase.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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This is a great reminder, my husband and I watched the moon's eclipse; words can't describe it. You did a great job though, "rays of light, piercing the tremulous colossus waves..." I loved this phrase.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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That is wonderful ! Thank you so much for a very encouraging review !
Comment from Eli Wilde
Hi Pili,
I must admit that it was your title that drew me in, I'm so glad it did.
This is a little beauty, your word usage has conveyed so many different images that are both vivid and dreamy, if that is at all possible. lol
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this one, well done.
Frank
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Hi Pili,
I must admit that it was your title that drew me in, I'm so glad it did.
This is a little beauty, your word usage has conveyed so many different images that are both vivid and dreamy, if that is at all possible. lol
Anyway, I really enjoyed reading this one, well done.
Frank
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Thank you so much Frank for a terrific review !
Comment from mildredmolanki
This is truely beautiful writing, and such great use of imagery, with lovely word choices. I would only comment, that although I read it many times...and love it...it feels unfinished some how. It feels to me as a reader that you still have a little left to say. Just a personal thing. Kind regards.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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This is truely beautiful writing, and such great use of imagery, with lovely word choices. I would only comment, that although I read it many times...and love it...it feels unfinished some how. It feels to me as a reader that you still have a little left to say. Just a personal thing. Kind regards.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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I truly appreciate your excellent review, it is no question that I could had go on, but to me it was all done.
Comment from Diny
Beautiful graghic- and beautiful phrases you have woven through this poem- as always I so enjoy your work- Is this a picture of a lunar eclipse?- I heard we had one last night?- Write on anyway - Di
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Beautiful graghic- and beautiful phrases you have woven through this poem- as always I so enjoy your work- Is this a picture of a lunar eclipse?- I heard we had one last night?- Write on anyway - Di
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Thank you so much Diny, I am so glad you enjoy this one !
Comment from babylonia
what a night to be reading this, on the night of a lunar eclipse. i didn't see it but i imagine it is lovely. easy to read and follow. no spag do i see. imagery is excellent. the picture is great. keep up the good work~
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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what a night to be reading this, on the night of a lunar eclipse. i didn't see it but i imagine it is lovely. easy to read and follow. no spag do i see. imagery is excellent. the picture is great. keep up the good work~
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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What a great review , thank you so much !
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you are very welcome~
babylonia
Comment from Fish
Excellent poetry. Great imagery.
Natural to the ear. Poignant.
Nice Balance. Beautiful flow.
I hope you keep writing here. Fish
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Excellent poetry. Great imagery.
Natural to the ear. Poignant.
Nice Balance. Beautiful flow.
I hope you keep writing here. Fish
Comment Written 21-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2008
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Thank you so much Fish for a great an encouraging comment !