Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Pili Pubul
Cyclic
Are life's seeds planted
I have run in circles
Toward a better place
All detours become vacations
I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
I absolutely love this poem, and this is , I think my favorite stanza, but I love all of them, great images and thoughts, love the style and presentation !
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Cyclic
Are life's seeds planted
I have run in circles
Toward a better place
All detours become vacations
I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
I absolutely love this poem, and this is , I think my favorite stanza, but I love all of them, great images and thoughts, love the style and presentation !
Comment Written 28-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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That is my fave stanza too.
Comment from Lance29
Very nice flow and format to this poem. I especially like the one word "subject" line to start each stanza. The language is rich and descriptive and the reader is left with a nice heartwarming message.
Lance
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Very nice flow and format to this poem. I especially like the one word "subject" line to start each stanza. The language is rich and descriptive and the reader is left with a nice heartwarming message.
Lance
Comment Written 28-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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blinders, eh? Thanks for reading
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Actually, I wanted that for one poem. It was the first time I used them, and did not realize they stay on until you take them off! Didn't mean any offense, BTW.
Lance
Comment from AK
Hello beautiful Jewell,
Sadly I am out of sixes, but this is the first poem I have read since I returned from Paris and the taste of romantic beauty stays intact for me in your poem. Luscious, lilting lines
drenched in fresh sweetness:
All detours become vacations
I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
I have missed you, dearest friend.
Love and warm blessings,
Ami
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Hello beautiful Jewell,
Sadly I am out of sixes, but this is the first poem I have read since I returned from Paris and the taste of romantic beauty stays intact for me in your poem. Luscious, lilting lines
drenched in fresh sweetness:
All detours become vacations
I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
I have missed you, dearest friend.
Love and warm blessings,
Ami
Comment Written 28-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2007
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Love you Ami. Welcome home!
Comment from Oatmeal
INNER SANCTUM,
What a beautiful poem this is! I have to agree with what you said in the end-
I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
The flow was smooth. Your arrangement was done well.
The imagery was wonderful. Very descriptive and created impressions are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2007
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INNER SANCTUM,
What a beautiful poem this is! I have to agree with what you said in the end-
I'd rather pick wild flowers
In a field of fantasies
Than find thorns on every rose
The flow was smooth. Your arrangement was done well.
The imagery was wonderful. Very descriptive and created impressions are very vivid and understandable.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2007
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Thank you hunny.
Comment from LarkSong
Dreams are good! Love, love, love your photography...Hi ya JJ--You may feel like you're running a marathon in circles, but if your writing and artwork are any indication, your creative touch is working just fine. Hang in there girlfriend...
Hugs,
Lark
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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2007
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Dreams are good! Love, love, love your photography...Hi ya JJ--You may feel like you're running a marathon in circles, but if your writing and artwork are any indication, your creative touch is working just fine. Hang in there girlfriend...
Hugs,
Lark
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Comment Written 28-Aug-2007
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2007
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It's all good. Just a little detour to make me take a rest....I'll be fine. I loved this shot too...a little photo taken alongside a Colorado Highway...Gotta love road trips when ya have time to stop and take photos. :-)