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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi shelley You know I are, just think how much easier it would be not worrying about how to keep up with all these modern gadegts.
Good luck in the contest.
gert
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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Hi shelley You know I are, just think how much easier it would be not worrying about how to keep up with all these modern gadegts.
Good luck in the contest.
gert
Comment Written 01-May-2007
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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lol
thanx lots :-)
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Hi you are welcome shelley.
gert
Comment from mmichelle97219
twas a simpler time
of basic needs survival
prehistoric life
with diverse organisms
inhabiting earth in peace
It may have been simpler but not easier, and I don't think survival of the fittest would be a peacful way to live. Just the first things that came to mind. Good luck in the contest.
Michelle
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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twas a simpler time
of basic needs survival
prehistoric life
with diverse organisms
inhabiting earth in peace
It may have been simpler but not easier, and I don't think survival of the fittest would be a peacful way to live. Just the first things that came to mind. Good luck in the contest.
Michelle
Comment Written 01-May-2007
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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lol
thanx lots :-)
Comment from Bryana
It was a different kind of peace! Yes, it was a simpler life, there were no destructive weapons and I agree organisms inhabited the earth in peace.
Well done.
There is nothing I would change.
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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It was a different kind of peace! Yes, it was a simpler life, there were no destructive weapons and I agree organisms inhabited the earth in peace.
Well done.
There is nothing I would change.
Comment Written 01-May-2007
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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thank you so much :-)
Comment from dragonqueen1983
best of luck in the contest as you have a well written poem here. i love the pictrue you used. its looks like something for the stone age. well done
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reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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best of luck in the contest as you have a well written poem here. i love the pictrue you used. its looks like something for the stone age. well done
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Comment Written 01-May-2007
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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thank you lots :-)
Comment from Oatmeal
Shelley Kaye,
I don't feel that I agree with the thoughts in your poem. I feel that the prehistoric animals fought against each other all of the time. It was not a time of peace.
The words you chose described your feelings very well. It was your opinion and we each have our own opinions. All is okay.
The flow was smooth.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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Shelley Kaye,
I don't feel that I agree with the thoughts in your poem. I feel that the prehistoric animals fought against each other all of the time. It was not a time of peace.
The words you chose described your feelings very well. It was your opinion and we each have our own opinions. All is okay.
The flow was smooth.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
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Comment Written 01-May-2007
reply by the author on 01-May-2007
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i guess it's just what i think of comparing then to now, know what i mean?
thanx lots for reading! :-)
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Shelley,
Yes, I understand. The dinosaurs didn't use guns! No traffic, no road rage!
Yes, it makes sense.
Love you,
Oatmeal
