That Man [is]....
Poetic romantic humor.26 total reviews
Comment from Siva
Yes, that man is emotional apart from some other vices associated with masculinity. You have chosen them well. May be his emotion saved him from being greedy.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Yes, that man is emotional apart from some other vices associated with masculinity. You have chosen them well. May be his emotion saved him from being greedy.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Thank you for your reveiw. Yes, this is the situation where the man's heart sticks his foot out and trips up the masculinity.
Comment from rhymer1
I love it. Your last line is an Ogden Nashian spit in the eye of acrostic fans. Wish I'd thought of it. Are they nashing their teeth? slainte, rhymer1
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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I love it. Your last line is an Ogden Nashian spit in the eye of acrostic fans. Wish I'd thought of it. Are they nashing their teeth? slainte, rhymer1
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Thany you very much for your review. All things considering, your views hold weight and this one surprised me. I appreciate you seeing the humor.
Comment from suda
Hello Mike K,
Great choice of words "Love sick"...which every word gives the meaning to love sick. Good job!
I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing,
Susan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Hello Mike K,
Great choice of words "Love sick"...which every word gives the meaning to love sick. Good job!
I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing,
Susan
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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No problem. Thank you for your reveiw.
Comment from healfromwithin
Hi, MikeK,
I liked what you tried to do with this piece. Some suggestions: remove the brackets from around "Is" in the title. It stands alone fine the way it is. The "K" part of your acrostic could be better; I'd use a "real" "K" word.
Good luck on your writing endeavors.
~healfromwithin
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Hi, MikeK,
I liked what you tried to do with this piece. Some suggestions: remove the brackets from around "Is" in the title. It stands alone fine the way it is. The "K" part of your acrostic could be better; I'd use a "real" "K" word.
Good luck on your writing endeavors.
~healfromwithin
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2007
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Thank you for your reveiw. I did look through the "K" words, but felt it best to keep the spirit. Another reveiwer accused me of short cutting, but I stated my arguement for the use of that word.
Comment from rhymerfortyniner
A well written acrostic, with good imagery and a bit of humour. Your description is very accurate. Lovesickness can cause one to be all these things and more. Good write. Verna
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2007
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A well written acrostic, with good imagery and a bit of humour. Your description is very accurate. Lovesickness can cause one to be all these things and more. Good write. Verna
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2007
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I thank you for your review
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You're welcome. Verna
Comment from judybonin
well, someone like that would just piss me off. he sounds like he marches to the beat of his own drummer. i guess to each their own. i liked the poem and the play with the word in the end. nice job.
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well, someone like that would just piss me off. he sounds like he marches to the beat of his own drummer. i guess to each their own. i liked the poem and the play with the word in the end. nice job.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2007
Comment from VICTIMEYES
love sick sometimes can be just how you say and present it here, nice acrostic, reads smooth and makes its point clearly.
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love sick sometimes can be just how you say and present it here, nice acrostic, reads smooth and makes its point clearly.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2007
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I thank you for your review
Comment from Swtdreamz
Vigorous flirt
Emotional - I can be like that-
can't help myself- it's so fun, all in innocent fun :D
Controls Nothing
Knon-sense-ic-cle - cute end, it's quite whimsical, and passes so easily
good job
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2007
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Vigorous flirt
Emotional - I can be like that-
can't help myself- it's so fun, all in innocent fun :D
Controls Nothing
Knon-sense-ic-cle - cute end, it's quite whimsical, and passes so easily
good job
Comment Written 11-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2007
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I thank you for your review.
Comment from mmichelle97219
This is a fantstic acrostic. I think you hit the nail on the head. Absolutely nothing to dislike Bravo.
Michelle
That Man [Is]...
Languished in thought
Oblivious
Vigorous flirt
Emotional
So Annoying
Irreverent
Controls Nothing
Knon-sense-ic-cle
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007
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This is a fantstic acrostic. I think you hit the nail on the head. Absolutely nothing to dislike Bravo.
Michelle
That Man [Is]...
Languished in thought
Oblivious
Vigorous flirt
Emotional
So Annoying
Irreverent
Controls Nothing
Knon-sense-ic-cle
Comment Written 11-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007
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Thank you very much for you review. Occasionally I will put out a funny one.
Comment from Red Heart
The ability to find humor in our "oblivious" and "vigorous"
flirtatious behavior is always entertaining fodder.
Thank you for sharing this one.
A fun one to review.
Red Heart
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007
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The ability to find humor in our "oblivious" and "vigorous"
flirtatious behavior is always entertaining fodder.
Thank you for sharing this one.
A fun one to review.
Red Heart
Comment Written 11-Apr-2007
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2007
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I thank you very much for you reveiw. Sometimes we become wrapped to tight, and I like dynamiting log jams. I will occasionally put out a little poetic humor.
