Reflections For The New Day
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Comment from Kingsland
well Jewel, if I had a sixth star left
this would be receiving it
for this in my estimation is one of your best
and I really liked the way that you ended this piece
Anticipation can be yours
If you imagine nature's music
While your soul
takes its first dance step
this was my pleasure to read and review this well written verse... John
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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well Jewel, if I had a sixth star left
this would be receiving it
for this in my estimation is one of your best
and I really liked the way that you ended this piece
Anticipation can be yours
If you imagine nature's music
While your soul
takes its first dance step
this was my pleasure to read and review this well written verse... John
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Wow, really? Thanks John.
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YES... REALLY...
Comment from Diny
You encapture nature and romance
Talk of music and of dance
Don't give another girl even a chance!
To come close to good...
I find your writing such sweet refrain
and it flows so gentle like a spring rain
If I ever could I'd try again
To be as good as you!
Hugs kiddo- Youda WOman!
Di
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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You encapture nature and romance
Talk of music and of dance
Don't give another girl even a chance!
To come close to good...
I find your writing such sweet refrain
and it flows so gentle like a spring rain
If I ever could I'd try again
To be as good as you!
Hugs kiddo- Youda WOman!
Di
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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LOL You DO write beautifully. I thank you so much for supporting me with your kind reviews. I appreciate you.
Comment from dragonqueen1983
really nice poem. i like the picture and how you've made the font color match it. can't find any mistakes so well done :) keep on writing
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really nice poem. i like the picture and how you've made the font color match it. can't find any mistakes so well done :) keep on writing
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
Comment from sengwriter
What a motivation my friend.
Do you know what you did?
You just tempted other poets
to stop writing for a while and
to go out to witness this splendid
canvas of Natures' royal painting.
Oh how nice, you've started with
a sunrise and through a setting sun
entering the romance of serenity of
a moonlit night...with twinkling starts.
Wonderful.
Gautam :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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What a motivation my friend.
Do you know what you did?
You just tempted other poets
to stop writing for a while and
to go out to witness this splendid
canvas of Natures' royal painting.
Oh how nice, you've started with
a sunrise and through a setting sun
entering the romance of serenity of
a moonlit night...with twinkling starts.
Wonderful.
Gautam :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Amen. :) Thanks for noticing. When we stop
to notice life around us, the inspiration too lives.
Comment from kiwi bloke
Hi there Jewel
Another beautiful poem you have graced us with, from your seemingly endless repitore ? of stunning work you promise a new adventure with each new day and a magical evening if we open or minds and our souls and dance to natures rhythm yes I do like the feeling of moon beams bringing me joy.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Hi there Jewel
Another beautiful poem you have graced us with, from your seemingly endless repitore ? of stunning work you promise a new adventure with each new day and a magical evening if we open or minds and our souls and dance to natures rhythm yes I do like the feeling of moon beams bringing me joy.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Well, well...Are you dancing yet?
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Na only in my mind I have a broken ankle at the moment but I use to love running around in moon beams when i was younger
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Jewell. Thgis is a lovely poetic piece. You have used some truly beautiful imagery to express your thoughts and feelings, for example, "Each sparkle in each star creates a silent melody." Awesome
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Hi Jewell. Thgis is a lovely poetic piece. You have used some truly beautiful imagery to express your thoughts and feelings, for example, "Each sparkle in each star creates a silent melody." Awesome
Comment Written 21-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Thanks Wendyanne.
Comment from Oatmeal
Jewell,
I absolutely love this poem. Because I am an ex-dancer I like the last stanza the best-
Anticipation can be yours
If you imagine nature's music
While your soul
takes its first dance step
The first step is always the hardest with stage fright but after that it is a piece of cake.
I saw no spelling or grammatical errors.
Love,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Jewell,
I absolutely love this poem. Because I am an ex-dancer I like the last stanza the best-
Anticipation can be yours
If you imagine nature's music
While your soul
takes its first dance step
The first step is always the hardest with stage fright but after that it is a piece of cake.
I saw no spelling or grammatical errors.
Love,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 20-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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:) Thanks for the great comments, Oatmeal.
Comment from LarkSong
So uplifting, JJ~I love the light and enlightenment, the hope, the music, and movement of dancing...such a celebration in words. The stunning graphic is like pure gold; I just want to hug this poem. Beautifully brilliant.
Luv ya,
Lark
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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So uplifting, JJ~I love the light and enlightenment, the hope, the music, and movement of dancing...such a celebration in words. The stunning graphic is like pure gold; I just want to hug this poem. Beautifully brilliant.
Luv ya,
Lark
Comment Written 20-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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;) You rock.
Comment from shy1250
This was beautiful--brought tears to my eyes. Not doing much today about offering constructive criticism--I simply don't have any. It's been a while since my soul felt like dancing, but I still remember--am going to save this to my puter to try to get my blue emotions back over to anticipating!! A great read--I cn see how u got to the #9 spot!! shy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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This was beautiful--brought tears to my eyes. Not doing much today about offering constructive criticism--I simply don't have any. It's been a while since my soul felt like dancing, but I still remember--am going to save this to my puter to try to get my blue emotions back over to anticipating!! A great read--I cn see how u got to the #9 spot!! shy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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ahh, thanks. How sweet. Glad to lift your spirits a little.
Comment from Martie
This poem is so true to the lovely way a soul can see if they are open to life and to the feeling it can bring. You are a lovely poet....your song shows the beauty within you. Thanks
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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This poem is so true to the lovely way a soul can see if they are open to life and to the feeling it can bring. You are a lovely poet....your song shows the beauty within you. Thanks
Comment Written 20-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2007
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Thank you Martie, so much.
