Reflections For The New Day
Viewing comments for Chapter 64 "Life Line"17 total reviews
Comment from suresh kumar
Hi Jewell,
Glad to know your mome is doing well.
'That the death
You were to
Experience
Could bring you
Life '
Wow what a great statement of truth! Thi was outstanding.
.suresh kumar.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
  |
Hi Jewell,
Glad to know your mome is doing well.
'That the death
You were to
Experience
Could bring you
Life '
Wow what a great statement of truth! Thi was outstanding.
.suresh kumar.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
-
Hi suresh! Thank you dear fan! I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Oatmeal
Inner Sanctum,
Very nice poem! I enjoyed reading it very much. The theme was very clear. I saw no spelling or grammatical mistakes. I wish you the best in 2007!
Love you,
Oatmeal
|
Inner Sanctum,
Very nice poem! I enjoyed reading it very much. The theme was very clear. I saw no spelling or grammatical mistakes. I wish you the best in 2007!
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
Comment from LarkSong
Wonderful words! Hi, JJ--What a great job you did with this little gem...The simple profoundness of the question is truly awesome. On a personal note, the question posed couldn't resonate more clearly, or be more apt; your poem absolutely strikes a chord right here, right now, with me, and I thank you.
Sincerely,
Lark
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
 |
Wonderful words! Hi, JJ--What a great job you did with this little gem...The simple profoundness of the question is truly awesome. On a personal note, the question posed couldn't resonate more clearly, or be more apt; your poem absolutely strikes a chord right here, right now, with me, and I thank you.
Sincerely,
Lark
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
-
WOW!
Thank you
not only for your adoration
but for your
"getting" me.
I love to strike a chord...
I'm hearing familiar music again...
Do you?
-
:)Yes
Comment from PoesyPoet
The picture is just perfect. I can appreciate the thought and wisdom of this adage but to me it is more like a quote then a poem. Nevertheless, it is well appreciated.
Celeste
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
 |
The picture is just perfect. I can appreciate the thought and wisdom of this adage but to me it is more like a quote then a poem. Nevertheless, it is well appreciated.
Celeste
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
-
Dynamite comes in small packages. ;)
Comment from fanlight
The meaning in this is that "there is" life after death - perhaps they are both telling us the same thing - will we know or do we wait until we get there - very deep and spiritual - nice one - very dark - take care - Fanlight
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
|
The meaning in this is that "there is" life after death - perhaps they are both telling us the same thing - will we know or do we wait until we get there - very deep and spiritual - nice one - very dark - take care - Fanlight
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
-
I don't think you got it at all.
We have to die to self to have a full life.
-
Will go back and read again - it appears I got it totally wrong - sorry - it just seemed to say that to me - Jean
-
Please don't be "sorry" different interpretations are ok. Just thought I'd clarify.
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
This is a very finely penned piece. Thought provoking and interesting. I love it when a poem stirs my mind, as well as my heart. This one did that. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
|
This is a very finely penned piece. Thought provoking and interesting. I love it when a poem stirs my mind, as well as my heart. This one did that. Hugs and smiles, Susanne
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
-
Hi, thanks for the comments. I like it when my poetry stirs one's mind as well.
Comment from bjivor2005
I like the way you bring the two different fortune-readers together, with their different takes and even varying levels sof respect from common cuture. The only thing I would suggest, and this is an extremely minor nit: I think the word "life" at the end should have it's own line, to add to the power and hte feeling of completion. "You were to/ experience/Could bring you/Life." Seems to have more of a punch, to me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
|
I like the way you bring the two different fortune-readers together, with their different takes and even varying levels sof respect from common cuture. The only thing I would suggest, and this is an extremely minor nit: I think the word "life" at the end should have it's own line, to add to the power and hte feeling of completion. "You were to/ experience/Could bring you/Life." Seems to have more of a punch, to me.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2007
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2007
-
YES! Love the suggestion.Thanks so much!
-
Hey, glad you liked it. Thanks for considering, and using, my suggestion. - Brandon