Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Patricia,

This is so clever. Since I am an artist, as a teacher, I never allowed anyone to trade someone's drawings. If something was there long we would take a photo of it and hang it. Any thing a child put on the board or paper was respected by me and it is smart to value a child's art. Excellent poem!

Love Alexandra xx

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it very much.
When I was a junior in high school I took art. The first assignment that our teacher gave us was to draw a picture of a book on a table almost everyone except me, drew a rectangle, put a title on it and that was their book, but I did not. I used perspective on my book and it was laying open and I had perspective on it. The teacher gave me an A on it. Patricia.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 28-Mar-2025

I am sure she did!! That was quite intelligent and creative, Patricia! Beautiful, treasured story. Thank you for sharing that. Love, Alexandra

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You have personified this white rose with both your image and your poetry Patricia and I enjoyed your fine words to pay tribute to this beautiful rose, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work. It is very much appreciated.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

Beautiful drawing of a white rose and a poem telling the story. I am so in awe of people who can draw and paint. I wish I had even a speck of talent in that area. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025

Thank you for your lovely comments. I appreciate

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A beautiful chock white rose. This artist is amazing. It's like you could reach out and touch the flower. I can't imagine another artist erasing this lovely piece of art.
A beautiful poem Patricia

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025

Thank you for your review. It is very much appreciated.

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

Did you do this also with AI? It is a beautiful rose. I always liked white roses. You do such unique art with your epressive language. Just think-We know the God who first created the rose!

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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Thank you so much for taking your time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

If that was done with chalk, that artist needs to be in a gallery. I love how you hinted at the fragility if the art with reflects the tenderness of the actual flower. Beautifully written. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work I appreciate it very much.