Daffodils
Spring flowers36 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
Is this haiku? Because I think you nailed the form perfectly. I also liked the picture that goes with the poem. As always, thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Is this haiku? Because I think you nailed the form perfectly. I also liked the picture that goes with the poem. As always, thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Jessi,
Thank you for the great review. Yes this is a Haiku. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Ceclia
Comment from Janet Foor
A cheery message and I so hope you are right that "Spring is Here to Stay. The artwork is perfect and sends a message of hope and joy.
Blessings and Happy Spring.
Janet
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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A cheery message and I so hope you are right that "Spring is Here to Stay. The artwork is perfect and sends a message of hope and joy.
Blessings and Happy Spring.
Janet
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Janet,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope spring is here to stay for the northern states. Anything is possible at this time of year.
Cecilia
Comment from Barry Penfold
What a lovely poem. Bright and uplifting. Daffodils are just beautiful when in full bloom. I love the image and thanks so much for sharing. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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What a lovely poem. Bright and uplifting. Daffodils are just beautiful when in full bloom. I love the image and thanks so much for sharing. Take care and have a most wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Barry,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. You have a great day to my friend
Cecilia
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Cecilia,
I like his haiku about this beautiful flower and the hope it gives of Spring.
I this the smile metaphor is a good one. Because as it smiles it makes us smile too.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day and weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Hi Cecilia,
I like his haiku about this beautiful flower and the hope it gives of Spring.
I this the smile metaphor is a good one. Because as it smiles it makes us smile too.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great day and weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Joan,
Thank you for the wonderful review. Daffodils are so beautiful and are the first sign of spring.
Cecilia
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Don't mention it, Cecilia.
Joan
Comment from kahpot
Love your words of image, and how you have told us that spring is on the way, and the beauty it brings, your two rhyming lines are wonderful, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Love your words of image, and how you have told us that spring is on the way, and the beauty it brings, your two rhyming lines are wonderful, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Kahpot,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. It just popped into my head yesterday morning so I went with it.
Cecilia
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I sure hope those daffodils are telling the truth in your poem. I have a bunch of them up all over the yard. They do make a pretty presentation on a chilly rainy day.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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I sure hope those daffodils are telling the truth in your poem. I have a bunch of them up all over the yard. They do make a pretty presentation on a chilly rainy day.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Carol,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I hope I am correct also. Here in Texas it's probably a sure thing. Not to sure about the northern states though.
Cecilia
Comment from Nicki.B
I loooopve daffodils, they make me so happy!! My step mom always sends me the pictures when the first ones pop up and it just gives me joy.
Beautiful poem, happy and fresh with lovely presentation. I really enjoyed it!
Love Nicki xx
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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I loooopve daffodils, they make me so happy!! My step mom always sends me the pictures when the first ones pop up and it just gives me joy.
Beautiful poem, happy and fresh with lovely presentation. I really enjoyed it!
Love Nicki xx
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Nicki,
Thank you for the lovely review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem my friend. Daffodils make me happy too. One of my favorite springtime flowers.
Cecilia
Comment from June Sargent
i really hope spring is back and here to stay. I love this time of year. Flowers return, birds start tweeting and critters scamper across the lawn. Let's
enjoy!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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i really hope spring is back and here to stay. I love this time of year. Flowers return, birds start tweeting and critters scamper across the lawn. Let's
enjoy!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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June,
Thank you for the great review. Here in Texas it feels like summer already. UGH!
Cecilia
Comment from nancyjam
Cecilia this is a lovely spring 5-7-5. Descriptive language gives the reader a clear picture of a spring day in the garden. I love daffodils and your
artwork is a beautiful choice. You should have entered this in a contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Cecilia this is a lovely spring 5-7-5. Descriptive language gives the reader a clear picture of a spring day in the garden. I love daffodils and your
artwork is a beautiful choice. You should have entered this in a contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Nancy,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I seldom enter contest as I find them discouraging. Maybe one day I will win.
Cecilia
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a bright and cheerful rhyming 5-7-5, describing the delightful sight of daffodils smiling. Your subject and presentation are uplifting with bright yellow and green colors which are definite signs of spring.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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This is a bright and cheerful rhyming 5-7-5, describing the delightful sight of daffodils smiling. Your subject and presentation are uplifting with bright yellow and green colors which are definite signs of spring.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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LJ,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I think we are looking forward to spring. It seems like it has been a long winter.
Cecilia