Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

I love this Debi. It's such a wonderful idea... I agree 1000% we should all have a national day and we have so much to be thankful for, we get a little side tracked a times. Interesting poem style too!
Brilliant Debi, well done. I hope all is well with you?
Love Nicki x

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025

Hi Nicki, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely message about your National Day.
It was fun to see all who named something they are thankful for and what they would name for themselves. The form was difficult but lots of fun.

Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A fun form Debi and you did a great job with it. Another form that I am not familiar with. Excellent message and sentiment as well.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025

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Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A fun form Debi and you did a great job with it. Another form that I am not familiar with. Excellent message and sentiment as well.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2025

Hi Janet, I thank you with all my heart for this lovely message about your National Day.
It was fun to see all who named something they are thankful for and what they would name for themselves. The form was difficult but lots of fun.

Thanks again, my dear friend. Love, Debi

Comment from Robert Funston

Exceptional

Hi Debi. I just read your poem "National Make it your day". Cute and very well put together. It is a very easy read, with laughter, something most people could use daily. You gave the readers a chance to imagine what one very special day just for them would be. I've written a few poems, but they don't come easy. I read yours a couple of times and thought "What would Jake day be like?. Loved it. Jake

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025

Hi Jake, I can't tell you enough how much I appreciate your wonderful review and comments. Also I thank you for the honor of your six stars. Thank you again, so very much, Jake.

reply by Robert Funston on 29-Mar-2025

You earned it Debi. I enjoyed and. Your an artist. Have a great night.

reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025

You are too sweet. Thank you so much.

reply by Robert Funston on 30-Mar-2025

So are you. It shows in your writing. :)

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Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Oh my gosh, how fun. Your poem is creative and thought provoking. I love the lightheartedness in the midst of all the serious stuff out there. Hmmm, now what to choose for a theme?? National Bestie Day!!!

Much love, dear friend,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025

Hey Sweetie,I thank you so very much. This one was tricky with the odd syllable count.
So it was fun to make it about you! Thanks for all the kind words.
Love and hugs , Debi

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Do we do it here in the review box or is it posted in a club box elsewhere and is there an entry fee and deadline? Sometimes, I seem denser than hardening cement, I know, but it's a Polish identifier.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Oh Tom, I thank you so very much. And this is the place to put your gratitude. Gratitude even helps our pain.
This one was tricky with the odd syllable count.
So it was fun to make it about you! Thanks for all the kind words.
Love and hugs, Debi

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are engaging, descriptive, positive and creative.
I like the author's themes chosen for this poem. My favorite one is
being thankful. I pondered on this poem, as I smiled a lot! The poem
flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! I liked the message
stated in this artwork "Be You"!
Hi Debi, hope you are doing well. I am well and this beautiful poem
reminds me to be thankful for all that I have. Have a great day! Maria

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Hi Sweetie, I thank you so very much. This one was tricky with the odd syllable count. But it was fun.
So it was fun to make it about you! Thanks for all the kind words. Yes, thankful was my favorite too. That is exactly what I would expect from someone as sweet as you.
Love and hugs, Debi

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I like a National Day especially one with dreams and ice cream...Cute poem with lots of good things to think about. Put a smile on my face.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Hey Sweetie, I thank you so very much. This one was tricky with the odd syllable count. Big smile right back to you.
So it was fun to make it about you! Thanks for all the kind words.
Love and hugs, Debi

Comment from Kirsten Shonle

Excellent

This is great. It is so uplifting. I liked that it changed what kind of day it was, all positive. The rhyming was great. I'm glad you shared this wonderful piece and I'm glad I read it. It lifted my day.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Hi Kirsten, you are so sweet. I thank you so very much. This one was tricky with the odd syllable count.
So it was fun to make it about you! Thanks for all the kind words.
Love and hugs, Debi

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary

Excellent

Debi,

This is a beautiful markette poem. I guess it being national you day it can be anything you want. Calorie free ice cream well that's a concept, what about calorie free cake to go with it. Wonderful poem.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Hey Sweetie, I thank you so very much. This one was tricky with the odd syllable count. So I will see what I can do about a calorie free cake too. LOL.
So it was fun to make it about you! Thanks for all the kind words.
Love and hugs, Debi