Betrayal
The most well known betrayal in history.28 total reviews
Comment from talented150
This was a very interesting and thought-provoking poem. Betrayal is probably one of the worst things that happen in our life, because we weren't expecting it and it hurts especially bad when it is a friend. You talk about Jesus and how he was betrayed by a friend, a disciple of His own. But he had the faith that he could go through the crucifixion and be resurrected and give us freedom from the grave. When someone betrays me, I try to put it in perspective to what Jesus suffered, and then, as you asked, "Will you trust your faith?" to go on and forgive?
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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This was a very interesting and thought-provoking poem. Betrayal is probably one of the worst things that happen in our life, because we weren't expecting it and it hurts especially bad when it is a friend. You talk about Jesus and how he was betrayed by a friend, a disciple of His own. But he had the faith that he could go through the crucifixion and be resurrected and give us freedom from the grave. When someone betrays me, I try to put it in perspective to what Jesus suffered, and then, as you asked, "Will you trust your faith?" to go on and forgive?
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you for a wonderful review. -Bill
Comment from mrsmajor
Indeed the Son of God, did say...Father why have you forsaken me...right before he gave up His spirit to His Father...
yet he ended up by saying...
Father forgive then for they know not what they do...he felt sadness for the very ones that wanted his death.
His Faith was true to the end..
When my husband left us in final sleep, I almost loss the faith that had been a way of life for many years...and yet I couldn't give it up...
I believe even to this day, that God answered my prayers, and allowed me to deal with such a difficult time for me and our children...
The loss of one's Faith, would be the loss of the belief in a living, loving God...What would one's life be without Him...
At 90 years of age, I doubt I would still be here, if not for His mercy...That's why I give Him the praise only He deserves...
Thanks for sharing your post with us...Blessings
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Indeed the Son of God, did say...Father why have you forsaken me...right before he gave up His spirit to His Father...
yet he ended up by saying...
Father forgive then for they know not what they do...he felt sadness for the very ones that wanted his death.
His Faith was true to the end..
When my husband left us in final sleep, I almost loss the faith that had been a way of life for many years...and yet I couldn't give it up...
I believe even to this day, that God answered my prayers, and allowed me to deal with such a difficult time for me and our children...
The loss of one's Faith, would be the loss of the belief in a living, loving God...What would one's life be without Him...
At 90 years of age, I doubt I would still be here, if not for His mercy...That's why I give Him the praise only He deserves...
Thanks for sharing your post with us...Blessings
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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My dad died at 47, leaving behind four boys and a grieving wife with no work history. I didn't speak to God for almost ayear. God had betrayed me. And then…..a fanstory someday. Thanks for a wonderful review.-Bill
You'r very welcome it was my
pleasure!
Victoria
Comment from Elena Zhuravel
Hello
Quite an interesting narrative.
It's a pity it ended so quickl, I would love to see a continuation of this wonderful story.
Great work!!!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Hello
Quite an interesting narrative.
It's a pity it ended so quickl, I would love to see a continuation of this wonderful story.
Great work!!!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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What is so interesting is that he knew he was going to be betrayed and, he knew who would do it.
Thanks, Elena, for giving this a review. -bill
Comment from harmony13
The author's words made a lot of sense to me. The poem is engaging, descriptive, thought provoking and creative. I pondered on these words, and they made me think of when I am scared and don't trust my faith - I talk with God about it, as it gets me back on track. As I begin to trust my faith, in Him, once again. I found the author's words created a great question for many of us! Great Poem, William!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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The author's words made a lot of sense to me. The poem is engaging, descriptive, thought provoking and creative. I pondered on these words, and they made me think of when I am scared and don't trust my faith - I talk with God about it, as it gets me back on track. As I begin to trust my faith, in Him, once again. I found the author's words created a great question for many of us! Great Poem, William!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thanks for your review, Harmony. One of the best. -Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
Yes. That is the answer I have to give, the only one I can give to this masterful poem by a deeply religious man who has been someone to comfort and guide others in that inevitable, trying time we all must face. Yes, Bill, you will -- you must.
You know I don't ask you to read my work, but this time I am. I have a four-part story centered around faith I want you to read.
Don't review, just read. (Skeletons & Apparitions) < parts 1,2,3 & 4
Love,
In Christ,
Dawn
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Yes. That is the answer I have to give, the only one I can give to this masterful poem by a deeply religious man who has been someone to comfort and guide others in that inevitable, trying time we all must face. Yes, Bill, you will -- you must.
You know I don't ask you to read my work, but this time I am. I have a four-part story centered around faith I want you to read.
Don't review, just read. (Skeletons & Apparitions) < parts 1,2,3 & 4
Love,
In Christ,
Dawn
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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I read all you post (which is an amazing amount) but I don't review it because I need that time to read others. What I do is, reserve a six for you and when I know a six is posted, that's the one you get. But I will read Skeletons, 1-4 and plan on one of them will be reviewed and given a six. =Bill
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My friend, I am not concerned that you read Skeletons for any other reason than I want to share a truth I know to the depth of my being -- honestly, but thank you for the honour! Just read when you can, seriously, Bill, okay? Don't worry about a review! Hugs, Dawn
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I don't review very much but I promise to read Skeletons. We have become long-distance friends and it's a friendship I deeply value. =Bill
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I value your friendship too, Dr. Bill!
Comment from Harry Craft
Wow! Such a powerful poem on betrayal and such an ugly thing too. I really enjoyed reading this one as a believer betrayal is such a dirty word too. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Wow! Such a powerful poem on betrayal and such an ugly thing too. I really enjoyed reading this one as a believer betrayal is such a dirty word too. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thanks, Harry, for your review. -Bill
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You are so welcome Bill!
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi yes my advice is that you still trust your faith. Do not give it up. If you do, you would be like one of those betrayers.judas paid a high price for losing his faith remember...for a hand full of coins he sold his master , his dignity, and became the worst betrayer in whole history of mankind. Would you like this to happen to you.
Then there is the question is there anything Judas could do. He was the greatest friend of Jesus. By fate like Jesus who had a mission on earth, Judas also had a mission, computerised to fulfilled it and that was betraying His master.as far as Jesus or God is concerned Judas did not commit a crime, he was doing his duty. As to man who like to judge others, Judas is a criminal.i take the first view.
Benny
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Hi yes my advice is that you still trust your faith. Do not give it up. If you do, you would be like one of those betrayers.judas paid a high price for losing his faith remember...for a hand full of coins he sold his master , his dignity, and became the worst betrayer in whole history of mankind. Would you like this to happen to you.
Then there is the question is there anything Judas could do. He was the greatest friend of Jesus. By fate like Jesus who had a mission on earth, Judas also had a mission, computerised to fulfilled it and that was betraying His master.as far as Jesus or God is concerned Judas did not commit a crime, he was doing his duty. As to man who like to judge others, Judas is a criminal.i take the first view.
Benny
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Benny, this is a most convoluted review and I love it! Thanks. =Bill
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Hope my review helps
Benny
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
What a great poem. "And then, the suffering. we will all have a date with" was a great line. The betrayal, the faith all wrapped up into one. The kiss of betrayal really hits home. Thank you. I wish you much luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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What a great poem. "And then, the suffering. we will all have a date with" was a great line. The betrayal, the faith all wrapped up into one. The kiss of betrayal really hits home. Thank you. I wish you much luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thanks, Kirsten, for your review. It was fun shaping this poem. =Bill
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Will,
This poem is a wonderful mix of Jesus' faith through his betrayal and a prayer that you will have such faith in dealing with betrayal in your life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a terrific day.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Hi Will,
This poem is a wonderful mix of Jesus' faith through his betrayal and a prayer that you will have such faith in dealing with betrayal in your life.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a terrific day.
Joan
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Joan, for your review. And yes, I will keep writing. --Bill
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My pleasure, Bill.
Joan
Comment from teafor2
William, your title, candid theme and adamant indicting tone is showcased
in these enthralling pious strophes...The "...deep violation of the trust..." is
as your notes imply, is increased exponentially due to the "Betrayal" was exchanged for pieces of silver...Moreover, The Savior knew about it before it happened, and let it take place anyway...What manner of entity is/was this! I like that you put the onus on yourself and humanity for the "when's" "Will I trust my faith?" Such a great and personal question. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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William, your title, candid theme and adamant indicting tone is showcased
in these enthralling pious strophes...The "...deep violation of the trust..." is
as your notes imply, is increased exponentially due to the "Betrayal" was exchanged for pieces of silver...Moreover, The Savior knew about it before it happened, and let it take place anyway...What manner of entity is/was this! I like that you put the onus on yourself and humanity for the "when's" "Will I trust my faith?" Such a great and personal question. Good luck in the contest. teafor2
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025
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An excellent review. Thank you. -Bill
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You are welcome. teafor2
