Emerald Isle
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Comment from Wendy G
Ha - nothing is ever as it seems. They didn't check whether it was a scam, but really no one gets something for nothing. I would dsay that the common thread is that they all have something to hide ... but what? And who will go to what lengths to keep it hidden?
Wendy
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Ha - nothing is ever as it seems. They didn't check whether it was a scam, but really no one gets something for nothing. I would dsay that the common thread is that they all have something to hide ... but what? And who will go to what lengths to keep it hidden?
Wendy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a great start for all te talent around here to add to. These are a ot of fun to read but I'm afraid I'm still not up for writing a chapter.but I will do m best to keep up with th reading. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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This is a great start for all te talent around here to add to. These are a ot of fun to read but I'm afraid I'm still not up for writing a chapter.but I will do m best to keep up with th reading. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Are you still struggling with the pneumonia? I know I had mine for four months...I hope you get better soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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I am struggling with the left overs. I can barely breathe at times and am on two kinds of inhalers. It's very depressing :-(
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I'm so sorry to her that...breathing is a tough one.
Comment from lyenochka
It could be wonderful or it could be scary. Maybe they all have a common great-great ancestor. Maybe they all have offended someone in the past and this "gift" a really is the victim's revenge? Who knows? Great set up, Carol!
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It could be wonderful or it could be scary. Maybe they all have a common great-great ancestor. Maybe they all have offended someone in the past and this "gift" a really is the victim's revenge? Who knows? Great set up, Carol!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I don't see anything sinister here. A can't imagine a writer knocking any of these fine folks off... or toying with their fidelity. And I didn't see any jewelry to steal.
Good luck with the project. I hope you can keep all the contributors in line.
smiley face here
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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I don't see anything sinister here. A can't imagine a writer knocking any of these fine folks off... or toying with their fidelity. And I didn't see any jewelry to steal.
Good luck with the project. I hope you can keep all the contributors in line.
smiley face here
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Lori liked the idea of a paradise island so I had to give her what she wanted, but I can see this story going in so many different directions... There's mysteries there if you catch the clues. Thanks so much Wayne...Maybe you will join us this time?
Smiles, Carol
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Would I get to knock anyone off? Maybe the division manager? Maybe hideously? (just kidding) smiley face here
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Guess we have to see where Lori takes us with her chapter.... from there its the next author's choice. Let me know if you decide to join in. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
This is a great beginning of another book for you and your writer friends. You should tell Tim to get onboard he is an excellent writer. Look forward to more chapters.
Well done
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Carol,
This is a great beginning of another book for you and your writer friends. You should tell Tim to get onboard he is an excellent writer. Look forward to more chapters.
Well done
Cecilia
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Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2025
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Hey, Sis
We;re almost to the end of the novel and this is a quickly until I get things going again. You should jump in and try your hand at the story too. And yes, I've already told Tim.
Smiles, Carol
