Haiku (as wild fires burn)
A nature haiku (4-6-5)15 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is heartbreaking. The suffering animals hit hard. I could really feel the weight of the moment in just a few words. That last line is especially sad. You shared so much emotion in such a small space - really well done!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Your poem is heartbreaking. The suffering animals hit hard. I could really feel the weight of the moment in just a few words. That last line is especially sad. You shared so much emotion in such a small space - really well done!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful and inspiring comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, As Wildfires Burn, has the proper formatting and captures the devastation of the blazing timber as well as the helpless creatures devoured by the furnace.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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This 5-7-5, As Wildfires Burn, has the proper formatting and captures the devastation of the blazing timber as well as the helpless creatures devoured by the furnace.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Bill, yes, unfortunate, but it seems unavoidable, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Sad, but true. Fires kill more than just
trees. They kill our children's future. The animals harmed will decline in population. Children will see only photos of them on their devices.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Sad, but true. Fires kill more than just
trees. They kill our children's future. The animals harmed will decline in population. Children will see only photos of them on their devices.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your understanding comments, yes, whether from nature or man, their existence is declining, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from evilynne
That is a terrible haiku in regard to its subject matter. Of course, the writing is good, the haiku well done. Fire is a powerful force of destruction. Evi
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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That is a terrible haiku in regard to its subject matter. Of course, the writing is good, the haiku well done. Fire is a powerful force of destruction. Evi
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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The outcome is terrible, a subject to often ignored, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I think we've had so many experiences of exactly this, of both domestic cattle, sheep etc. and wild animals die tragically as well as humans and property, an excellent post Kahpot, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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I think we've had so many experiences of exactly this, of both domestic cattle, sheep etc. and wild animals die tragically as well as humans and property, an excellent post Kahpot, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Roy, yes, have witnessed a few, the aftermath is shocking, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Bless you
