The Kirby Case - Part 2
A detective attempts to catch a serial killer29 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
You have written a master piece on detectives and serial killers. I am glad the way the poem ends as every crime must someday be revealed irrespective of the smartness of the criminals. Well done, dear Pamusart.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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You have written a master piece on detectives and serial killers. I am glad the way the poem ends as every crime must someday be revealed irrespective of the smartness of the criminals. Well done, dear Pamusart.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your compliment and for your wonderful review
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, I like the way the police and others take everything into account when tracking down a killer/crime, and bit by bit as your wonderful poem with a story informs us, they are getting closer, very well written****kahpot
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Excellent, I like the way the police and others take everything into account when tracking down a killer/crime, and bit by bit as your wonderful poem with a story informs us, they are getting closer, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from DonandVicki
I'm sure this is the first poem that I have read and reviewed that was about a lead detective that is trying to catch a serial killer. Inventive and well written. Don
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I'm sure this is the first poem that I have read and reviewed that was about a lead detective that is trying to catch a serial killer. Inventive and well written. Don
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from bob cullen
Gee this is good. The story of a murderer in poetic and serial form. I just hope it doesn't have as many episodes as days of our lives. But I really do want to read more. You are very clever and just as creative. I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
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Gee this is good. The story of a murderer in poetic and serial form. I just hope it doesn't have as many episodes as days of our lives. But I really do want to read more. You are very clever and just as creative. I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Lea Tonin1
WowI don't know what else to say. Brutal poignant sad and informative too. Ugly subjects are often hard to write. This is something I know intimately. I see no issues with grammar or sentence structure or syllable count.In fact, I think the word you chose were absolutely perfect and spot on!
Well... There's only one thing that can be done about this. I hope you have an amazing night!
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WowI don't know what else to say. Brutal poignant sad and informative too. Ugly subjects are often hard to write. This is something I know intimately. I see no issues with grammar or sentence structure or syllable count.In fact, I think the word you chose were absolutely perfect and spot on!
Well... There's only one thing that can be done about this. I hope you have an amazing night!
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This second part is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day may you also have a wonderful week and may your new year be blessed with prosperity and happiness. Patricia.
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This second part is very well written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day may you also have a wonderful week and may your new year be blessed with prosperity and happiness. Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This story poem, The Kirby Case Part 2, finds the detective, Mike Brady, making progress in the murder case of three women. The procedural is interesting to recount.
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This story poem, The Kirby Case Part 2, finds the detective, Mike Brady, making progress in the murder case of three women. The procedural is interesting to recount.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I am really enjoying this poem-story of yours, Pam. The rhyme is smooth not forced, you use the right words for this mystery so none break the rhythm. I can't wait to read more. Well done again! :) Sandra xx
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I am really enjoying this poem-story of yours, Pam. The rhyme is smooth not forced, you use the right words for this mystery so none break the rhythm. I can't wait to read more. Well done again! :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
Another poem in the series, and the perplexing manner of the girls rape and deaths is very compelling, and you've written these poems with style and your incomparable ability to work with skill,language, rhyme and flow, well dine, blessings Roy
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Another poem in the series, and the perplexing manner of the girls rape and deaths is very compelling, and you've written these poems with style and your incomparable ability to work with skill,language, rhyme and flow, well dine, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Pam this is a. Mike Brady leads the team who is trying to solve the case. But they have got a bit of a break as evidence has been found on the scene. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla xcx
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Oh, Pam this is a. Mike Brady leads the team who is trying to solve the case. But they have got a bit of a break as evidence has been found on the scene. I can't wait to reading on. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
