Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Talking In His Sleep"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
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Comment from Wendy G
At least Dougie has made it through the night. I hope the police are as observant about the tyre marks as Miranda is, and will widen their scope as to what really happened. Their thoughts, emotions, and worries are all realistic, and well portrayed. Good job.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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At least Dougie has made it through the night. I hope the police are as observant about the tyre marks as Miranda is, and will widen their scope as to what really happened. Their thoughts, emotions, and worries are all realistic, and well portrayed. Good job.
Wendy
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Mitch is good, but he only goes by hard evidence. Miranda thinks outside of the box. Between the two of them, it will be solved. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I suppose it is good news that Dougie probably won't die, at least it makes Waylon happy. From the description of the scene of the murder, I suppose someone could force a car off the road coming toward them by taking up the middle of the road, but it still doesn't make sense that Dougie would go after the teacher.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I suppose it is good news that Dougie probably won't die, at least it makes Waylon happy. From the description of the scene of the murder, I suppose someone could force a car off the road coming toward them by taking up the middle of the road, but it still doesn't make sense that Dougie would go after the teacher.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol. It will probably be a while before Mitch and Miranda will get on the same page. Lol. Fireworks soon. Gretchen
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I couldn't sleep, it's 4am, and I found you'd posted another chapter of Miranda!! Now Miranda has been to where the fight happened, she has loads of questions, and I'm right there with her. There isn't any way Dougie could have forced Tomlin's car off the road, not going by the signs left there. Hmm, was there a third vehicle involved, did Dougie pull over to help Tomlin and ended up badly hurt himself? I wonder if Mitch is thinking the same as Miranda. Lots of questions, and it looks like Dougie could end up dependent on full time care, we won't know any of the answers until he wakes up. Great chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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I couldn't sleep, it's 4am, and I found you'd posted another chapter of Miranda!! Now Miranda has been to where the fight happened, she has loads of questions, and I'm right there with her. There isn't any way Dougie could have forced Tomlin's car off the road, not going by the signs left there. Hmm, was there a third vehicle involved, did Dougie pull over to help Tomlin and ended up badly hurt himself? I wonder if Mitch is thinking the same as Miranda. Lots of questions, and it looks like Dougie could end up dependent on full time care, we won't know any of the answers until he wakes up. Great chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Sandra. I think the Vegas trip was good for my muse. Gretchen
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your chapter! The way you describe the hospital and the tension in the air feels so real. I could almost feel the quiet in the hallways. I loved how you showed Miranda's thoughts and the mystery around Dougie's situation. It kept me hooked the whole time! Keep up the great work - I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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I really enjoyed your chapter! The way you describe the hospital and the tension in the air feels so real. I could almost feel the quiet in the hallways. I loved how you showed Miranda's thoughts and the mystery around Dougie's situation. It kept me hooked the whole time! Keep up the great work - I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next!
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Michael. I'm so happy you enjoyed this. Gretchen
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
She is in a very deep pickle. Everyone now knows about the money. Dougie knows. He will do everything he can to glom on using Waylon as his wedge. Dougie is the roach that doesn't die. He will come out without a scratch.Karen
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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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She is in a very deep pickle. Everyone now knows about the money. Dougie knows. He will do everything he can to glom on using Waylon as his wedge. Dougie is the roach that doesn't die. He will come out without a scratch.Karen
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Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Karen. Hopefully, the head injury will keep him from remembering. Lol. Appreciate the review. Gretchen
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But, everyone and their neighbor is gossiping about it. :-)
Comment from lancellot
A well written chapter, and yes bad things happen everywhere. With Doug being a primary murder suspect, I am a bit surprised there are no police, at least outside his room. Waylon's actions are normal for young man, even with the past, a son would want to be there for his dad.
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The nurse {on} charge gives me a pass to go to Dougie's room.
-The nurse in charge gives me a pass to go into Dougie's room.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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A well written chapter, and yes bad things happen everywhere. With Doug being a primary murder suspect, I am a bit surprised there are no police, at least outside his room. Waylon's actions are normal for young man, even with the past, a son would want to be there for his dad.
notes:
The nurse {on} charge gives me a pass to go to Dougie's room.
-The nurse in charge gives me a pass to go into Dougie's room.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you for spotting that edit. Im pleased you enjoyed this. Where i live on the Outer Banks (considered "paradise" to tourist) if crimes happen, which is rare other than drugs and B and Es, the newer locals are outraged. But crime is everywhere. Bad luck, cancer, infidelity, you name it. Where ever there are human beings you're gonna have bad things happening. Thanks for the review and stars. Gretchen
