Peace
A poem about Peace57 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
cool poem about peace, the world, changes war and peace and everything in between very timely meditation as we witness the peaceful transfer of power in the US
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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cool poem about peace, the world, changes war and peace and everything in between very timely meditation as we witness the peaceful transfer of power in the US
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Yes, Jake. I believe so. At least I am hoping we can still get it right. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from Tina Crute
Your poem about peace makes a strong point. we are doing all the same wrong things so nothing changes. When will we learn, I wonder? Your bleak background color suits the tone of the peace-less theme. You've well-expressed something that is difficult to define. It's moving:)
Tina
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Your poem about peace makes a strong point. we are doing all the same wrong things so nothing changes. When will we learn, I wonder? Your bleak background color suits the tone of the peace-less theme. You've well-expressed something that is difficult to define. It's moving:)
Tina
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Tina. I really appreciate your kind review!
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You are welcome!
Comment from jmdg1954
Your poem is staying the world as today in a well defined, logical method,
Hadn't the world basically been the same as this what seems forever?
Very thought provoking. Nicely presented.
John
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Your poem is staying the world as today in a well defined, logical method,
Hadn't the world basically been the same as this what seems forever?
Very thought provoking. Nicely presented.
John
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you John. I really appreciate your kind review!
Comment from Tim Margetts
Nicely done, Harry.
This poem captures in a thought-provoking manner the state of the world we live in.
I love the rhyming structure it adds strength and direction, and well done on that great rhyme for journey.
Tim
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Nicely done, Harry.
This poem captures in a thought-provoking manner the state of the world we live in.
I love the rhyming structure it adds strength and direction, and well done on that great rhyme for journey.
Tim
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Tim for your review! I really appreciate that!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
It is certainly a longing that many have displayed although those longings don't seem to have made it to the upper tiers of 'power' and the need to hold onto such... sigh. A heartfelt offering here that appeals to many... Thanx for sharing your pen! ;)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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It is certainly a longing that many have displayed although those longings don't seem to have made it to the upper tiers of 'power' and the need to hold onto such... sigh. A heartfelt offering here that appeals to many... Thanx for sharing your pen! ;)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Well, thank you so much Y.M. Roger. I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent poem that reminds us of our responsibility as a human race to seek avenues of less resistance and opportunities for greater connection and involvement with one another. I appreciate the lament that tells us we need to do better without picking one side or another and excoriating everyone else. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This is an excellent poem that reminds us of our responsibility as a human race to seek avenues of less resistance and opportunities for greater connection and involvement with one another. I appreciate the lament that tells us we need to do better without picking one side or another and excoriating everyone else. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is done quite well. Line five is unwieldy, It does not flow naturally. "Peace we are not learning". Try :
Why are we not learning? Otherwise you have no nits for me to pick. Us it or magic one of your own. Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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This is done quite well. Line five is unwieldy, It does not flow naturally. "Peace we are not learning". Try :
Why are we not learning? Otherwise you have no nits for me to pick. Us it or magic one of your own. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Yes, I know. I always looked at myself as kind of a Bob Dylan type never following anyone or the rules lol...Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!
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:-)
Comment from zanya
The final two lines of the poem gives us readers some food for thought about 'Peace' as the New Year begins and in stanza one line three the poet expresses his sorrow and his reaction to an absence of peace
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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The final two lines of the poem gives us readers some food for thought about 'Peace' as the New Year begins and in stanza one line three the poet expresses his sorrow and his reaction to an absence of peace
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Charles D Ezell
In this world we will always have adversity and war is at the top. We struggle for peace but there is none. The only peace we will ever have is in Christ. He said, "My peace, I give to you, not like the world."
You did well with this poem. Thank you.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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In this world we will always have adversity and war is at the top. We struggle for peace but there is none. The only peace we will ever have is in Christ. He said, "My peace, I give to you, not like the world."
You did well with this poem. Thank you.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Charles. And yes, you are so right!
Comment from harmony13
Great Poem! The author's words are heartfelt, clear and creative. I
pondered on these words and I agree with so much of what the author
said. When I worked and am now retired for me kindness always works but unfortunately, in our world today so many people are not kind. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Keep Writing! Happy New Year!..Maria
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Great Poem! The author's words are heartfelt, clear and creative. I
pondered on these words and I agree with so much of what the author
said. When I worked and am now retired for me kindness always works but unfortunately, in our world today so many people are not kind. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well. Keep Writing! Happy New Year!..Maria
Comment Written 04-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much Maria. And yes, you are so right. There are many people who are not so kind.
