A Writer's New Year
5-7-5 to begin with...21 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, creativity is an amazing thing,,out of nothing comes something, when we consider that God lived in the void in eternity, and then decided He'd create something from nothing, HNY Jenny, blessings Roy
Oh yes, creativity is an amazing thing,,out of nothing comes something, when we consider that God lived in the void in eternity, and then decided He'd create something from nothing, HNY Jenny, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, we all have a fresh start every time a new year rolls around. I love the reference to the empty page. It can stare at you blindly and demand what you can't possibly give or it can invite you to write another favorite poem to post on fanstory.
Either way, we always have a fresh start!
Jesse
Yes, we all have a fresh start every time a new year rolls around. I love the reference to the empty page. It can stare at you blindly and demand what you can't possibly give or it can invite you to write another favorite poem to post on fanstory.
Either way, we always have a fresh start!
Jesse
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
Comment from Sugarray77
Hey there Lisa. I like your philosophical poem and it's perfect for the 5-7-5. So good to see your name shine on the front page. I look forward to reading more from you!!
Melissa
Hey there Lisa. I like your philosophical poem and it's perfect for the 5-7-5. So good to see your name shine on the front page. I look forward to reading more from you!!
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray! You're back, Jenny! But I'm off this month so won't be seeing your posts this month. At any rate, I'm still rejoicing to see your name and hope you have a wonderful time writing and sharing here!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
Hooray! You're back, Jenny! But I'm off this month so won't be seeing your posts this month. At any rate, I'm still rejoicing to see your name and hope you have a wonderful time writing and sharing here!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thanks for your warm response Helen. I took a break for a year and now feel ready to re-engage. Thanks for the pump. Enjoy your January - I hope you'll be doing something interesting.
Comment from dovemarie
Hi Lisa, your simple 5-7-5 shows how every new year should start - an empty page soon to be filled with new beginnings and fresh starts. Each new year reminds me of a ferris wheel where the seats go round and round to the top, then start down and ultimately bring you back to the top. Dove
Hi Lisa, your simple 5-7-5 shows how every new year should start - an empty page soon to be filled with new beginnings and fresh starts. Each new year reminds me of a ferris wheel where the seats go round and round to the top, then start down and ultimately bring you back to the top. Dove
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like the simplicity of this. I like the photo and how it fits your theme so well. I like the rhyme in lines 2 and 3 although I know 5-7-5 poems don't usually rhyme. I like the message. I guess not so simple after all.
I was so pleased to see your name in my inbox. I hope you are planning to write for FanStory this year. I have missed you.
I like the simplicity of this. I like the photo and how it fits your theme so well. I like the rhyme in lines 2 and 3 although I know 5-7-5 poems don't usually rhyme. I like the message. I guess not so simple after all.
I was so pleased to see your name in my inbox. I hope you are planning to write for FanStory this year. I have missed you.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
Comment from RodG
I like how you, as a writer, have begun the New Year by sharing a poem you wrote. I assume you have resolved to write something every day. I have. I wish you well, Lisa.
Rod
I like how you, as a writer, have begun the New Year by sharing a poem you wrote. I assume you have resolved to write something every day. I have. I wish you well, Lisa.
Rod
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Welcome back! Nicely apt! Your post is beautifully presented with a message of hope for the year ahead. Your 5-7-5 complies fully with the brief. Good luck and Happy New Year! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
Welcome back! Nicely apt! Your post is beautifully presented with a message of hope for the year ahead. Your 5-7-5 complies fully with the brief. Good luck and Happy New Year! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thanks for your comments Debbie. I took a break for a year but hope to be a worthwhile contributor again. Happy New Year good wishes to you too!
Comment from patcelaw
Happy new year. It has been quite a time since I have seen anything from you and it's good to see you back. I wish you the very best in the contest and welcome back to fan story Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
Happy new year. It has been quite a time since I have seen anything from you and it's good to see you back. I wish you the very best in the contest and welcome back to fan story Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your good wishes Patricia. I took a break for a while but hope to reignite my writing again. Happy new year warm wishes to you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It's good to see you back as we have missed your work Lisa. Happy New Year to you and I hope this is the start of many new beginnings for you, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
It's good to see you back as we have missed your work Lisa. Happy New Year to you and I hope this is the start of many new beginnings for you, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2025
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I appreciate your comments Dolly. Thanks for your positivity and may you have a happy and fulfilling 2025. xx