The Swan Dance
A lesson of love17 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It is too early in the week for me to give all my sixes to you. But this story easily deserves a seven. It is lyrical in its beauty and creates a mental picture that is as beautiful as the words. It is really a kind of unrhymed poetry, yet not quite blank verse.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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It is too early in the week for me to give all my sixes to you. But this story easily deserves a seven. It is lyrical in its beauty and creates a mental picture that is as beautiful as the words. It is really a kind of unrhymed poetry, yet not quite blank verse.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Nothing but love and magic here. You have been posting continuously, with each story a gem of inspiration!
Your muse is in warp drive...
I'm breathless in wonder at how prolific you are!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Nothing but love and magic here. You have been posting continuously, with each story a gem of inspiration!
Your muse is in warp drive...
I'm breathless in wonder at how prolific you are!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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A lot of turmoil in my life of late again has been the throttle to driving me to write, write, write. I appreciate your kindness and understanding.
Smiles, Carol
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, you're 18 points away from second place in the ranked author running, and should be second anyway. But we know that story. I didn't realize it but, Wendy must post continually. But you are the number one novelist, Barbara is second, and Jim isn't even close in third. I'm not superstitious, but just so I don't give you a heart attack, I'll wait to say the C word when the tallies are in. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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Well, you're 18 points away from second place in the ranked author running, and should be second anyway. But we know that story. I didn't realize it but, Wendy must post continually. But you are the number one novelist, Barbara is second, and Jim isn't even close in third. I'm not superstitious, but just so I don't give you a heart attack, I'll wait to say the C word when the tallies are in. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
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I hope I can make it to second...Wendy deserves first because she's been posting shorts all year and I'm not greedy. I'll keep my fingers crossed for novelist and be thrilled of course. I know how FanStory works so I'll wait until January 1st..... But thank you for helping me reach my goal. I've got a few more of the pond stories to hopefully push me over the top. I appreciate your support even with the silly ones. Thank you so much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
Very well written I enjoyed very much listening to it. I especially like that very last line that you use because it is such a poignant message. May you have a lovely evening and may God bless you and give you a wonderful new year. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Very well written I enjoyed very much listening to it. I especially like that very last line that you use because it is such a poignant message. May you have a lovely evening and may God bless you and give you a wonderful new year. Patricia.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful and magical story. Thinking back to your last story, Jeremiah became a frog in order for the release of the stone sister, and for the pond to become magical, and it is a sacrifice he was willing to make because of love, which is now the key eleemnt of the pond. Lovely writing, and very imaginative.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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What a beautiful and magical story. Thinking back to your last story, Jeremiah became a frog in order for the release of the stone sister, and for the pond to become magical, and it is a sacrifice he was willing to make because of love, which is now the key eleemnt of the pond. Lovely writing, and very imaginative.
Wendy
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lancellot
Well, I have to agree. Love is a magic all its own, and perhaps the true food of life.
This is a wonderful children's story. I can see young boys and girls reading this with wonder in their eyes. It has the perfect wholesome theme for young readers.
Great work. You're on a roll, today.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Well, I have to agree. Love is a magic all its own, and perhaps the true food of life.
This is a wonderful children's story. I can see young boys and girls reading this with wonder in their eyes. It has the perfect wholesome theme for young readers.
Great work. You're on a roll, today.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I've sent you so many thank yous I am probably boring you, but know that each and everyone of them is heart felt. I sincerely appreciate the support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another fine Timmy story. How sweet he brought his friend to share the magic with him. Great story I wish I believed in the magic.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Carol,
Another fine Timmy story. How sweet he brought his friend to share the magic with him. Great story I wish I believed in the magic.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You're welcome my friend
