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Savior

Jesus died for me

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Comment from lyenochka
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You certainly met the syllabic form of a 5-7-5 to share the Good News of Jesus taking away our sin and guilt from the fallen nature we inherited from Adam. Praising Him with you1
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
    lyenochka,

    Thank you for the lovely review and contest wishes. I appreciate you.

    Cecilia
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is a good poem for the 5-7-5 contest. You might want to change that last line slightly, however, to Sin has been removed. I suspect most readers here believe your sins are gone before you reach heaven. Best of luck in the contest and have a lovely New Year.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
    Carol,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. A lot of people think you go to heaven upon death. That is not the case. You take a dirt nap until Jesus returns. He calls those out of the graves first and then the rest of his children follow, only if they know him. The rest of the people die in the fire on earth.

    Cecilia
reply by Carol Hillebrenner on 29-Dec-2024
    There are many different beliefs about death, so you may receive other suggestions.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
    You're welcome
Comment from Charles D Ezell
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Yes, He is the answer to our problems and the forgiver of our sins. So good of you to glorify our King.Truly, He is Lord of all. Sending blessings your way,

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Charles,

    Thank you for the lovely review. The Lord is truly the answer to everything.

    Cecilia
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Cecilia.
-Your note is appreciated.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good opening lines establish the premise.
-A very good concluding line that shows
how faith can change our lives.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Pam,

    Thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate you my friend.

    Cecilia
reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Dec-2024
    You are very welcome, Cecilia. Hope you are doing better.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    I have good days and bad days. I had to pick up dog food and started crying when I went in to pick it up. Next week I bring my baby girl (ashes) home and that will probably gut punch me again. Crying is good for the soul. I have 2 other dogs at home, but their not her.
reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Dec-2024
    Thanks for sharing Cecilia. Maybe your other dogs can bring you some comfort.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
    Pam,
    They do to a point. Angel would always jump off the couch and squeal when I got home. Her little wiggly bottom going a hundred miles a minute. Now I come home to absolute silence. The other dogs could care less. It's the little things like that, that I miss. Everyday gets a little better.
reply by Pam (respa) on 29-Dec-2024
    Thanks for sharing, Cecilia. It is like people; no two are alike. I am glad each day is getting a little better.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
    Thank you Pam. I appreciate you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I expect you are enjoying the support of your faith at this sad time Cecilia as you lost your beloved dog. I enjoyed your faithful post, I hope you had a wonderful Christmas and I wish you a Happy New Year, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Dolly,

    Thank you for the wonderful review. My faith is helping immensly. I will see her again. My heart still hurts so much though.

    Cecilia
Comment from karenina
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You can't go wrong with The Holy Spirit as your muse, Cecilia. I sense the Lord is attending to you as you grieve for Angel -- and that, my friend is a blessing. Used to be when Haiku "always" had a seasonal reference, but I think in the modern day rules have broadened.

At any rate -- great message for all who have faith and lean on Jesus!

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Karenina,

    I believe he is here helping me through my grief. Somedays are better than others. Today is rough because its been a week. The other day I went to the vet for dog food and lost my shit. It's not a happy place for me. Next week I have to go and pick her up (ashes) and bring her home. I know I will lose it then.

    Thank you for the wonderful review and thank you for being patient with me while I grieve.

    Cecilia
reply by karenina on 28-Dec-2024
    Grieving has no timetable. It really does take as long as it takes. I'm not being patient. I've been there and I hope you feel my support.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    I do feel your support and I appreciate it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Yes, the Holy Spirit can and often does inspire us to write. Jesus is our Savior and covers us with grace. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Thank you for the wonderful review. God is good.

    Cecilia
Comment from Angel Debbie
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Nice simple and easy to understand, the way things should always be, I think you have a great chance with the contest. Have a blessed day and thank you for sharing this wonderful 5-7-5

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.

    Cecilia
Comment from Darlene BoClair
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I like that your poem speaks of a mission to share our Savior with the Fanstory family. God can be what we want Him to be. Today has allowed Him to become the creative poet you speak of victory.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Darlene,

    Thank you so much for the lovely review. The Holy Spirit put it on my heart to write this.

    Cecilia
Comment from royowen
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Yes, the best way I know for removing sin is confess it to the Lord, and He can remove it as far as the east is from the west, (Psalm 103:12) this is terrific advice Cecilia, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Roy,

    Thank you for the beautiful review. I appreciate it.

    Cecilia