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Famitree Flames

Hybrids endangered

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Comment from DonandVicki
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I have been trying to come up with a good Minute for the contest and your poem has inspired me to go with something more exotic like yours. well written.

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Oh wow that's a fine compliment! I find it difficult to make something that's the stand out that the eye gravitates too. Then follow it up with some decent words. It can be tricky. I mean, I've found it tricky. Many times I don't win very many of these things. I think i've won a couple times that's about it so I thought tough crowd! I appreciate your attention, your time and your fine rating to. O, I'm happy to see you here. Once again. Thank you.And I really hope you have an awesome new year!
Comment from Aussie
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I liked the follow-up to the first poem. Maybe they should stay away from soft soil? They might take root in the earth! The artwork is fantastic, being an artist myself, I can appreciate the time that went into this.
I wish you well in the minute contest. K xx

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much again. Appreciate you spending your time here. I truly feel honored that with responses and kind things that you and others have said. I appreciate it more than anyone knows. And it is the reader that's the most important their opinion matters, it helps us hone our skill. Thank you again!
Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello Lea. I am amazed at the wonderful artistic talent you show us in these posts about tree people. Your attention to detail is stunning and your verses are supported with good writing and excellent word choices. A joy to read.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Melissa. I really appreciate your comments and your great rating and your time. Especially at this time of year.Well, thank you very much.I'm so happy like it! I hope that you have a great Christmas and that your New Year is even better. Thanks again![
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I havee to say, you have done all three poems brilliantly. I do hope you continue this idea. I love it. A Humitree, now mated and procreated. Though the ending of this one reads as if they are all killed off. I suppose if Human man is still around we would expect nothing less than his destructive nature. Another great poem. Well done, this fitted into the minute poem contest perfectly. Good luck! :)) Sandra x

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    I'm very pleased, yes, indeed, please. That you like them, please. That your response is so enthusiastic.I shall continue on with this humitree family as they face down danger and all the things that come with life. I appreciate the time you spend on commenting and responding.It is a great gift.Thank you!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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I love the concept along with the wonderful artwork but why the word decimation at the end of this minute? What do you mean by decimation? Please clarify this for me so that I too can understand and celebrate the culmination of a new species of manitree.
Jesse

 Comment Written 26-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Hi, Jesse.Sure I'm happy to explain what's happening to them is a fire has been started. It kills the other humitree in the area. Fires the thing they'll fear the most. But Manitree and Girlitree save the last by discover what they could do. Decimation refers to the human tree that didn't make it. But they will, of course, interview an adventure, and I shall write out going forward. So happy that you're here and offering your great comments. You have such insight that I appreciate very much. I'm glad you liked them. That is the best of all. I hope your Christmas is grand and New Year. We'll be grander two!
reply by Jesse James Doty on 26-Dec-2024
    Now I understand. Fire is what they fear most. Decimation refers to the trees that didn't make it.
    I am very happy to support you and this adventure into a new species of humantrees. Go for it!
    Happy New Year!
    Jesse

Comment from kahpot
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I have thoroughly enjoyed these poems, and to read them here presented in this form is a pleasure, so very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thank you again, this is great. I'm so happy to see your review. Create rating the wonderful comments you give! I hope Santa was good to you and yours and that you had a great day. And I hope your New Year's is amazing too. Thank you again so much!
Comment from ESOSTINE
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This your invented poetry science fiction, of humans and trees existing on one body is unique and creative. I pray the laboratories don't make it a reality as the world gets loose in the field of absurdity. Thanks for sharing your work. Have a blessed Christmas full of joy and hope.

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    I very much appreciate this so much. And I hope that your holiday is great. And that your new year's will be even greater.Yeah, that wouldn't be good if that happened in real life for sure. I enjoyed making a pictures and writing the story poem and I think I'll go with it for a while and see what happens. Thank you again. Enjoy your amazing Christmas Day. And I hope your new year's is memorable.Have a great night thanks again!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. You do a wonderful job using single words to get the most meaning out of a poem as possible. This is another great poem. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Barbara thank you so very much! Are you ready for the big guy to come down your chimney? I hope he brings you everything you need. Everything you deserve and everything you wish for you and yours have a fabulous christmas.I wish you all the best.Thank you again!
Comment from Neonewman
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What a wonderfully unique style, Lea. The artwork is exquisite as well. I wish you the best of Holiday and New Year, my friend.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Thank you steve thanks so much! I'm glad you like my art and my poems. I'm happy that it comes at a wonderful time like Christmas. Thank you for your awesomeness, your time.Most of all that you like it! I hope do you have the best Christmas? I hope the fat guy makes it down. Your chimney and gives you everything you wish.For and deserves, have a wonderful christmas eve.Thank you again!
reply by Neonewman on 31-Dec-2024
    My pleasure, Lea. I hope your Christmas was wonderful and blessed, my friend. May this New Year be the beginning of something extraordinary for you and your family.
Comment from EILEEN LAW
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Sometimes in trauma Comes talent and resources in ways that can be unexpected.

Bravo all the writers that are brave enough to express themselves on paper and put themselves out there as they do

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024
    Wow this six is just awesome! Your comments are quite delightful. Too, and i'm very sure that every writer in the world appreciates it! Thank you for this great thing, braiding for your time.Most of off, and that you like it. I hope that your holiday is amazing.A great that you and yours get everything you hope for and wish for! Thank you again enjoy your christmas eve!