Humitree
A poem of creation, my word is create27 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem did for me what all good poetry should do and that is; open and expand the readers mind. I get the word create in your poem and enjoyed the moving experience.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Your poem did for me what all good poetry should do and that is; open and expand the readers mind. I get the word create in your poem and enjoyed the moving experience.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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That's awesome.What a fine complimentI really appreciate that! Best of all, you like it for which i'm pleased. I'm always mindful of a person's time as well as to read it. And I think the time to think about it and offer comments and send that in so that too is valuable. I hope you have a most amazing holiday that you get everything you want and need. That you and yours are healthy, and you have an amazing night ho.Ho ho all that good stuff!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great One Word Base Poem. This is science fiction to the hilt. To think trees and humans can recreate is bizarre. I guess in a sci-fi any thing is possible.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is a great One Word Base Poem. This is science fiction to the hilt. To think trees and humans can recreate is bizarre. I guess in a sci-fi any thing is possible.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you again, Cecilia. I'm glad this is entertaining. It's entertained me so far as far as imagining it and making the art and writing the words.It's been a great process, thinking about a story. Appreciate your comments and hanging out here with me again, ho.Ho ho!
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You're welcome
Comment from Sugarray77
Excellent work on crafting an amazing poem. Your internal rhymes add a depth to this work and the creative concept of humans and trees is new and interesting. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Excellent work on crafting an amazing poem. Your internal rhymes add a depth to this work and the creative concept of humans and trees is new and interesting. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thanks Melissa! You are always encouraging and supportive. Appreciate that about your reviews most of all! I'm always happy when someone likes what I wrote. And this is no different plus it has an inkling of carrying on! I hope you and yours and well and your holiday goes grand ho.Ho ho!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the one Word Base poem contest. I am intrigued by these creatures you have created and I hope you have plans to write a book about them. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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An excellent entry for the one Word Base poem contest. I am intrigued by these creatures you have created and I hope you have plans to write a book about them. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Yes, you hit the nail on the head. Definitely, thinking about it. As the storyline seems to be coming almost unbidden. So we'll go with the flow and see what happens. Thanks, marilyn.Once again.I'm happy to see you here! Have an awesome evening!
Comment from Jim Wile
Fantastic monorhyme poem, Lea! You definitely exceeded the requirements of this contest. This should be a sure winner.
Such a neat followup to your previous poem about this unusual hybrid couple tasked with repopulating the earth with a new species. These accompanying pictures are fantastic too. I really loved this poem.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Fantastic monorhyme poem, Lea! You definitely exceeded the requirements of this contest. This should be a sure winner.
Such a neat followup to your previous poem about this unusual hybrid couple tasked with repopulating the earth with a new species. These accompanying pictures are fantastic too. I really loved this poem.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hello, thank you! The most amazing review and the big 6. Wow, that's a real honor thank you! It's starting to become a thing. Perhaps I shall see. Will the rest of this new species goes. Thank you Jim for the rocking review! The amazing rating in most of all, your time, which is precious as everyone's thank you again!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
you nailed the format of this contest and created a rich world filled with alien creatures. I like the image chosen and like these lines the best
Ancient ooze the last to wait
distilate
Human tree a hybrid state
inseminate
Mixed genes rolling dice bent gate
commiserate
Set the stones with strong debate
retaliate
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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you nailed the format of this contest and created a rich world filled with alien creatures. I like the image chosen and like these lines the best
Ancient ooze the last to wait
distilate
Human tree a hybrid state
inseminate
Mixed genes rolling dice bent gate
commiserate
Set the stones with strong debate
retaliate
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Totally glad you liked this one completely pleased.Thank you very much! Always happy to see you here. You've usually got on point things to say, and you don't say anything unnecessary, and I believe you're truly truthful in everything that you do r saying. I think you deserve everything santa can bring you! Thank you again, thank you for your time. Have an amazing holiday for I don't chat with you again until later!
Comment from EILEEN LAW
So cool. All the same rhyme could. Be. A rap Song. Cool. Picture too. You write all the time.....do you ever rest? Creative juices flowing
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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So cool. All the same rhyme could. Be. A rap Song. Cool. Picture too. You write all the time.....do you ever rest? Creative juices flowing
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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No rest for the wicked they say.... I wonder about the good wicked....? thank you for the awesome six star I'm amazingly happy to receive them and appreciate so very much!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Wowie zowie!!! Your creativity and poetic license are off the charts with this one!! So vivid and terse and exceptional!!
This one has Winner's Circle ALLLLL over it!!
Awesome artwork you created for it, too!! Total package here!!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wowie zowie!!! Your creativity and poetic license are off the charts with this one!! So vivid and terse and exceptional!!
This one has Winner's Circle ALLLLL over it!!
Awesome artwork you created for it, too!! Total package here!!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Wow, stunning review, stunning stars. Bobbit, thank you so very much. Your words always inspire me. Miss rockin redhead! I have been taken over by the writing Bub. Then fleshing out my chapters, creating different poetry. Tried one of those 10 lines, 2 stanza's Atlantic parameter typhones. That was a challenge. I don't think I got it right. But well, what are you going to do? Thank you again this is awesome!! Hope your night's great!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Now this is how I interpreted this brief as a monorhyme with your base word, create. You really are on a roll with this theme, Lea! The visual is amazing and the woman reminds me of you:) I think I'd like to go through this metamorphosis! What a great word, 'primordiate' and they all link together so well. Your wonderful verse is vividly bursting forth with new life, a hybrid between human and tree and creating immense power and beauty. This theme, inevitably, born from your passion for trees and nature evolves into a brave new world, perhaps. Well done and good luck, Lea. Warmest wishes, Debbie.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Now this is how I interpreted this brief as a monorhyme with your base word, create. You really are on a roll with this theme, Lea! The visual is amazing and the woman reminds me of you:) I think I'd like to go through this metamorphosis! What a great word, 'primordiate' and they all link together so well. Your wonderful verse is vividly bursting forth with new life, a hybrid between human and tree and creating immense power and beauty. This theme, inevitably, born from your passion for trees and nature evolves into a brave new world, perhaps. Well done and good luck, Lea. Warmest wishes, Debbie.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Once again the most amazing review! You see things so succinctly very cool! I'm glad you like it. I'm glad you're enjoying artwork and word play and all that! And you're right. I do love the mountains and the trees and all things natural. I don't hate that thought. I'm not having any trees! A few humans that I quite adore need to hang around too! Thank you. I really appreciate this in your time. Words. And your thoughts and insights. Always a pleasure. Have a wonderful holiday. I don't talk to you again.I'm going to you and yours have all the best!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You are having fun with these hybrids half human half tree creations Lea and I am enjoying your musings. Do you think that humans could inherit the seasonal shedding of leaves every year? This could leave these humans with no hair! A fun post and I enjoyed the creative end rhymes too, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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You are having fun with these hybrids half human half tree creations Lea and I am enjoying your musings. Do you think that humans could inherit the seasonal shedding of leaves every year? This could leave these humans with no hair! A fun post and I enjoyed the creative end rhymes too, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly, as always, you give the most amazing reviews! Glad you like my artwork on the qualm. On my brain, that's going a little bit wacko, picking up these interesting, thanks, I love the trees.I couldn't see them being gone forever. Thank you again. I hope that your holiday was would be great. Hope you have an awesome evening!
