2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from royowen
Just love the artwork, I never really thought of the sunset as being as tangerine appearance, but I think you're right, I'll have to start seeing things in definitively colourful, even dreams, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Just love the artwork, I never really thought of the sunset as being as tangerine appearance, but I think you're right, I'll have to start seeing things in definitively colourful, even dreams, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Comment from shelley kaye
excellent satori with the wheat fields waving goodbye in the cooling autumn breeze...
nice imagery of a tangerine sunset, too
smooth flow
no spag or typos
one thing - in your notes, you say it's for a contest... but i don't think it's entered in because there's no link for it - so you may want to check on that...
thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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excellent satori with the wheat fields waving goodbye in the cooling autumn breeze...
nice imagery of a tangerine sunset, too
smooth flow
no spag or typos
one thing - in your notes, you say it's for a contest... but i don't think it's entered in because there's no link for it - so you may want to check on that...
thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from DonandVicki
A lune that brings out feelings of late summer with the wheat fields ripe and the setting sun bringing on a cooler evening. The artwork complements your well-chosen words.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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A lune that brings out feelings of late summer with the wheat fields ripe and the setting sun bringing on a cooler evening. The artwork complements your well-chosen words.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely day and you also have a very good week and may God bless you with a very merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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This is a very nice LUNE poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest and you have a lovely day and you also have a very good week and may God bless you with a very merry Christmas.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
If the "wheat fields are waving goodbye," I wonder if this is a clue that it must be harvest time and autumn has come? A lovely haiku / lune poem which captures the sky and ground.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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If the "wheat fields are waving goodbye," I wonder if this is a clue that it must be harvest time and autumn has come? A lovely haiku / lune poem which captures the sky and ground.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Wendy G
This is very beautiful, Gypsy, the third line is special. Your presentation is wonderful, and the images and colours of the font create considtencywith the words. Very well done.
Wendy
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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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This is very beautiful, Gypsy, the third line is special. Your presentation is wonderful, and the images and colours of the font create considtencywith the words. Very well done.
Wendy
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
The colour in the visual is beautifully described by your word 'tangerine' which immediately warms the reader, inviting us into your picturesque landscape, enhanced still more by the personification of the wheat fields. An evocative and enjoyable read! Good luck, Gypsy! Debbie
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The colour in the visual is beautifully described by your word 'tangerine' which immediately warms the reader, inviting us into your picturesque landscape, enhanced still more by the personification of the wheat fields. An evocative and enjoyable read! Good luck, Gypsy! Debbie
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, 😊 I appreciate your exceptional review. Happy holidays.
Gypsy 😊