When I snow, I remember
The Spirit of Nature & Earth, reflecting on snow.16 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is quite creative for something that you get as a challenge for somebody. I wish you the very best with your writing. I enjoyed this one very much and I wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. Patricia.
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This is quite creative for something that you get as a challenge for somebody. I wish you the very best with your writing. I enjoyed this one very much and I wish you a very merry Christmas and a happy new year. Patricia.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your poem, "Snow is my Promise," beautifully captures the essence of nature's resilience and the purity of snow as both a memory and a hopeful promise. The imagery you and Erin G have created is vivid and evocative, blending reflection with a deep sense of longing for a time before human impact. The contrast between the untouched beauty of nature and the historical events is poignant and powerful.
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Your poem, "Snow is my Promise," beautifully captures the essence of nature's resilience and the purity of snow as both a memory and a hopeful promise. The imagery you and Erin G have created is vivid and evocative, blending reflection with a deep sense of longing for a time before human impact. The contrast between the untouched beauty of nature and the historical events is poignant and powerful.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A chilling, but beautiful picture here. The purity of snow is sullied by man's inhumanity to man and the more we learn about the dreadful things man has done, the more disappointed I we are in humanity. A poignant post, love Dolly x x x
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A chilling, but beautiful picture here. The purity of snow is sullied by man's inhumanity to man and the more we learn about the dreadful things man has done, the more disappointed I we are in humanity. A poignant post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from Alex Biasin
Very Cool (pun intended)
I loved the picture, it matches the poem perfectly.
The poem itself was a very enjoyable read, I thought it was quite lyric and it had a really good rhythm to it.
Good stuff!
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Very Cool (pun intended)
I loved the picture, it matches the poem perfectly.
The poem itself was a very enjoyable read, I thought it was quite lyric and it had a really good rhythm to it.
Good stuff!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from Barry Penfold
I think you have done pretty good job with this. Love the image and particularly like your last stanza. Well done and thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful Christmas and New Year.
Regards,
Barry Penfold.
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I think you have done pretty good job with this. Love the image and particularly like your last stanza. Well done and thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful Christmas and New Year.
Regards,
Barry Penfold.
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
Comment from Gerard F Keogh
The photo is very apt and evocative. I like the alternate verse makeup and the whimsy that takes you out towards the encroachment of man and how he can denigrate something like this so carelessly, so cruelly. Regards Gerard
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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The photo is very apt and evocative. I like the alternate verse makeup and the whimsy that takes you out towards the encroachment of man and how he can denigrate something like this so carelessly, so cruelly. Regards Gerard
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Gerard,
Thank you for your insightful review. You get it. Many do not.
Happy Holidays! Neil (Me and Erin G)
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Gerard,
Thank you for your insightful review. You get it. Many do not.
Happy Holidays! Neil (Me and Erin G)